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Reviews for Tied Around His Finger

By : fyrbyrd074
  • From schwaerze on January 08, 2010
    Oooooh, so did I get this right, you got together with Reno on the Sims??? I bet he´s a hell of a bf XDDD And you know, that Yazoo MPREG story got actually inspired by your stories! I love them so much, as you know, and I thought that I´d try my hands on a mpreg story too XD Right now I´m a little stuck for ideas, but hopefully that´ll change soon ^^ (I have never been pregnant, so I dunno what key experiences I can pull outta my magical head *cough*). And I get to decide??? WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! Okies, but I´ll tell you in the review for the new chapter, so I can see where this is going and won´t mess up your plot XD But now on to the actual story (and yes, I did squeal again when I saw it was on XD)

    Haha, Reno is trying to be romantic and gets snapped at, poor thing XD I can understand it however, Yazoo is pregnant, and a morning grouch and gets groped again… and he is Yazoo, of course, I love it when he gets snappy at Reno XD They have this really weird tension going on between them…

    And I just love their deal!!! It´s a bit mean of Reno to take advantage of Yazoo´s vulnerable situation, but that´s just soooo him! And it sounds very promising too *silently drools* I wonder if Reno already has an idea what he wants to do to Yazoo…-I bet he has XD And Yazoo is so brave to allow that, he must be really desperate to find his brother O.o

    My, this smut is the smex! Reno is such a tease! But I love it ;) Also how frustrated Yazoo became- wonderful! First I wasn´t sure if he was just annoyed that Reno was chafing him and that he didn´t really enjoy the sex, but obviously he was just frustrated because he liked it and Reno took his sweet time XD

    Ah, and I loved the part where Reno thinks about how Yazoo can get anyone to do anything! He is allure indeed, and I am wondering who could resist him? Probably only asexual people XD Still it´s awesome how much in control Reno is! That he can just slow down again – though Yazoo really kinda deserved it, being a bad boy and kicking him with his feet on the back XDDD

    “Well I’m not. Fuck you! Fuck me!” Hahahahhahahahaaha, I think this is the winner of the sentence of the chapter XDDDDD Yazoo´s such a pushy bottom, I could so see his face when he shouted that !!! Eyes all blazing and angry and needy XDDD

    Oh, that was an interesting conversation the two had; I can totally understand that Yazoo doesn´t trust the people who ‘use’ his body and he probably sees his own body as a tool and as something he has to protect – which is because he learned from experience, I´m afraid. On the other hand Reno is right too; Yazoo should be allowed to let go too, to not always have to be in control and take care that no one hurts him… Thinking about it now it is really sad, in a way :( *huggles Yazoo close* And I am also a bit glad Reno refused the deal in the end, because he is right. Loz deserves his happiness as well, I guess. And now Yazoo needs to beat the shit out of Vincent so that he stops moping and finally stands up to what they have *cheers them on*

    Though I´m just a tiny lil bit worried about Reno now XDDDDD This last part was epic again, Reno cleverly got a fuck for free, but he shouldn´t get anywhere near Yazoo anytime soon XDDD

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