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Reviews for Son Of The Devil

By : AlexiKnight
  • From kirastastefultragedy on May 06, 2010
    I loved the very unique idea of this story. I wish you had done some more detail filling in like in between the times that vicious was not with cloud. and maybe a little bit after they were reunited.

    Aside from that I think that the story was fun and I love the name vicious btw (because of cowboy bebop.... dang vicious was my fave character and he was kindof like sephy in a dimented sort of way) and I
    also loved how everyone confused him with vincent at first.

    I think you should do more with him as a character...like some fill in mini stories maybe?
    good job

    ps: just a thought... (jus' some constructive criticism) ... maybe if you do more stories in the future you could break up the paragraghs just a wee bit more. It makes it easier for the eye to follow as you are reading along. compared to the larger paragraph set up. I am certainly no professional though. But I love reading other people work!!
    *thumbs up*
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  • From KiraInANutshell on March 29, 2010
    Uh... Yeah..
    Good story idea.
    But honestly, it's not my style. (Style as in using ** for actions.)
    Plus, I found it quite hard to read since the speech hasn't been put on separate lines, same goes for thoughts.
    I love the story, from what I actually managed to read, but the formatting needs a little work. Good job though.
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