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Reviews for Choco-Love

By : TheSilentWriter
  • From ANON - shusuika on February 01, 2013
    I have the weirdest boner right now XD
    good job!
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  • From ANON - avi on April 26, 2011
    would love to see this pairing go all the way
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  • From ANON - Nex on January 14, 2011
    The concept interested me, and i got into it. the idea of chocobos thinking of cloud as a sort of god was very interesting. at first the dialog between the birds was kind of... odd,but understandable. i looked past it and kept reading. Rather than work up to a sexual encounter, you just jumped into it without much explanation, and your use of language is what made me not able to continue. The story does have potential, though.
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  • From innoke18 on September 08, 2010
    I say option B and Angeal/Cloud
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2010
    I vote Cloud is kidnapped and then bought by Turks/Soldiers, preferably Turks.
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  • From RikaBernkastel on February 22, 2010
    Wow, that was... interesting. Really nice ideas you have there... it would be really a shame to leave it as a oneshot.

    Pairing: I would love Sephiroth/Cloud as a final pairing.
    Choose: B. Cloud getting kidnapped and bought by/Saved by Turks/Soldiers from an Underground Slave-Trade Ring.

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  • From ANON - Fanfic Fanatic on February 21, 2010
    I really enjoyed reading this and would love you til the end of time if you turned this into a longer story.

    I choose:

    A. Discovered/Captured by the Turks/Soldiers who go on a mission to Neibel.

    pairing: Angeal/Cloud or Genesis/Cloud or Tseng/Cloud


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  • From ANON - mizuki on February 21, 2010
    mmmmmm...... it was certainly interesting t read. about ideas why don't you try cloud getting kidnap by seph, and make him call a best lover and try to punish him.
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