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Reviews for On Your Knees Boy

By : fyrbyrd074
  • From schwaerze on March 29, 2010
    Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!! New chapter! *happy dance spiced with squeals* I´m sorry to hear that yu were so stressed, that sucks :( But at least you got good weather XD It´s been snowing here for 3 months -_-

    When I saw the title my legs were getting weak already XD That sounds very very promising!

    Okies now, onto the story *rubs hands*

    Haha, poor Yazoo, he doesn´t get a minute of peace XD Harrassing redheads... But at least Rude is helping him, I bet Yazoo needs all he sleep he can get XD


    ...uhm, or maybe not O___o Seph seems pissed, choking poor Yazoo *secretly excited* But really, he has to visit Yazoo more often, it´s his own fault XD


    Haha, Sephiroth´s reply to „Get off“ had me rolling on the floor, very clever XD

    Oh... So Sephiroth wants an heir who will become the next ruler of the world... Creepy, but also very exciting, he´s so ebol! But poor Yazoo, he´s being so used :( He´s being treated like some birth mashine...

    Chrchr, nasty Seph, it must be very frustrating fro Yazoo, Sephiroth´s playing games with him, but they are oh-so-delicious XD And he really begs so prettily^^

    And I think that it makes total sense that Sephiroth is alive as long as Yazoo and Loz are! I fear a bit for Loz though, Sephiroth´s plans do not sound pleasant (though I totally gushed when he said he´d spare Yazzy XD)


    Hah! And it´s really no surprise that Seph comes extra hard with Yazoo, the latter is such an expert when it comes to such things XD It certainly won´t help him getting Sephy off his back though *cough*

    „And I have lots of stamina, lots and lots of stamina.” For some reason that sounds like a threat XD

    Gnar, when Sephiroth called Yazoo 'boy', I think my brain died a bit from the awesome ness XD But of course Yazoo has to be defiant *roots a bit for him*

    “You. Are. What. I. Say. You. Are,” said Sephiroth as he punished Yazoo. - My, someone´s agressive XD But... in a very sexy way^^

    Ew, forced deep throating, poor Yaz >_< And then he gets raped too.. It´s so sad that he is 'used to it' already, poor poor thing :( Well, at least Sephiroth shows some consideration later and „allows“ him some rest... I think Yazoo is a very clever guy, knowing how to deceive the crazy general, and it is so sweet that he has Vincent in mind^^ So now vinny needs to get over himself and finally acknowledge their relationship and stand up for Yazoo!

    Another awesome chapter, love, the sex marathon left me a bit breathless and there were so many conflicting emotions! On the one hand I found Sephiroth´s domineering side very sexy; on the other hand I felt sorry for Yazoo being manhandled like that, without him enjoying it. The sephzoo fangirl inside me squealed and tried to see only the good side, like sephiroth being a bit softer^^ but I suppose in this story yazoo really does belong to vincent emotionally, and sephiroth might have some power over his body, but not his heart. I can´t wait to see where this is going, thanks so much for writing this dear!!!
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