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Reviews for Walking Out on Destiny

By : HarliqueenNight
  • From ANON - Dirge on January 25, 2013
    Omg, omg! I can't wait for season 3, I love how you've managed to twist all the Turks fate together and what you've done with the Soliders. I spent all night and day just reading straight through it.
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  • From ANON - Nana on January 22, 2013
    This story is my crack.

    No joke. I don't even have anything interesting or constructive to say, just that I really, really, REALLY enjoy reading this whenever you update it.
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  • From ANON - Lady Demi of Megid on January 09, 2013
    Welcome back! It's so good to see an update for such an amazing story! I had feared it was abandoned! Good thing I always check back! Hurray! First things first! I truly hope you get well soon. Health is always much more important than anything cause if you're not healthy than you can't really focus on much else, so from one of your devoted fans, Get well SOON!
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  • From ANON - Ice on January 08, 2013
    Ahhhhhhh! I just about DIED reading this. I was super excited to see that you had another update so soon after your last one,
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  • From saraphin on October 27, 2012
    geh...gah...why is there not more?!

    why is there not more?! two days of reading and i want to know what is going ooooooon.

    who will everyone end up with? what is going to haaaaaaaaaappen
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  • From Aijanai on September 25, 2012
    Great job! Your fic is so awesome I only created an account in AFF to review it and tell you I love the fact you're taking your time to develop the characters and the plot, instead of throwing it all together hastily. Please continue.
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  • From someonesneaky on September 23, 2012
    This is an excellent story so far -- I could hardly stop reading it. It's one of the most unique ones I've ever read, with so many different ideas and sub-plots, the various budding relationships and how they develop over time.

    That being said, I do have a request - please, please find a good beta reader! It's interesting to see how you've improved even from one chapter to the next, but you still have a lot of spelling and grammar errors, and mis-used words (like 'your' instead of 'you're' or 'u' instead of 'you', for example), especially in the earlier chapters. If you could find someone to go over the whole thing with a fine-toothed comb, then this story would be more than awesome - it'd be damn near perfect.

    Please note, it's not a complaint -- if it bothered me that much, I wouldn't have read through the whole thing and still want more. If anything, it says something about your storytelling ability that I kept reading, even with errors that normally would have me leaving after the first chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi on July 09, 2012
    Omigosh! I'm sooooo relieved that you are doing better and even have a job! ^^
    Congrats to chu!
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  • From ANON - eilidhdawn on June 28, 2012
    peaz write more
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  • From ANON - Ursula on June 27, 2012
    I'm so happy your feeling better and back to updating. It may feel like a while since you've updated but I know one thing, you haven't lost you touch.
    The new chapters are great! Can't wait for what's next.
    Thanks for such an awsome fix.
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  • From ANON - angel_dove on June 26, 2012
    No!!!! Tseng can't die. Anyway now that I got that out of my system. Beautiful chapter. I especially love the tender moment between Tseng and Reno. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Ice on June 25, 2012
    Im not going to lie, it made me sad to read about Cloud and Zack. I think Seph needs and wants him more than he is willing to admit. :( But still, it's really good thus far!
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  • From ANON - Sparrow on June 25, 2012
    So I'm probably going to be super creepy and just constantly leave you reviews now, but you posted a new chapter, sooo... I thought I'd leave another review. Because I really do like this story a LOT.

    Continual excellence in plot and character development. I live the way you write overall, and spelling/grammatical errors are so rare and inconsequential that they really don't matter.

    Also, if Tseng dies, I will also ACTUALLY die. I know that sounds over-dramatic, but it's not. I will actually die. ... Okay, so maybe it's being a touch over-dramatic, but SRSLY. Guise. Guise, srsly. ... Guise...
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  • From ANON - Sparrow on June 20, 2012
    I have literally never read a story that was 20+ chapters before. I ALWAYS lose interest in a massive way and just stop reading. This is the first story where I read every chapter, then gotten ti the end of what had been written and completely freaked out. "WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH MY SPARE TIME NOW?! NOW I ACTUALLY HAVE TO USE IT TO BE PRODUCTIVE. DAMMIT."

    Seriously.

    This is awesome.

    I hope your health takes a turn for the better as well! I mean, you don't know me, but it still really sucks to be continually sick. You have the well wishings of a stranger being sent to you!
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  • From darkaura204 on March 26, 2012
    Welcome back. Great chapter.
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