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Reviews for All Roads Lead to Midgar

By : Jdee
  • From Aerawyn on May 04, 2013
    So I went to your page to see what else you'd written that I might like and realized I'd already read a bunch of your stuff. I pulled up Jar of Dirt anyway to refresh my memory on it's plot and realized you swiped it's intro and reused it here in All Roads. Cheeky! :P But I don't blame you; I always hate writing the introductions of a story: "where to start, where to start? What do I absolutely need to describe/explain to set this up properly?" and all that.

    Anyway, you have my support. I hope the plot bunnies and muses and whatever else drive your writing in this direction in the coming months. Please don't be the next installment of "interesting time-travel/re-do story that 'goes on hiatus' and dies halfway through" because I don't know if I can take another heartbreak ^_~ (Looking at you, Fusion, Green Dreams, Almost Karma, Redemption, and so, so many others: you guys _break_ my heart!)
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  • From Aerawyn on May 04, 2013
    Well, it's not the best writing I've read, but it's far, far from the worst, and it's definitely cute and interesting. Plus it's a fresh take on the time travel trope, which is my biggest guilty pleasure, without being so extremely ridiculous that I can't overlook the plot holes (besides, it sorta seems like you'll fill them in as you go).

    I think you've underestimated Zack a bit; I think his 23-year-old mentality would be a little smoother than this; he is the FF7-verse king of suave after all. And everything feels like it's advancing at a really fast pace--they have two years but Zack has basically spilled everything in a single day.

    Other than that though, I really like it and can't wait for more. I look forward to your updates!
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  • From liuzheng on April 19, 2013
    omg!! Chapters 2 and 3 were fun.xD
    poor Zack, can not tell lies
    I would not mind if they alter the story a bit ;D
    I'll be waiting for updates
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  • From ANON - Dea D on January 17, 2013
    Okay, this is just bloody amusing and well writ.
    I'll be checking back for updates in a little while.

    Seems you are doing fine as far as writing goes, and
    I hope you continue this story.
    Wouldn't mind much if they /did/ alter the outcome of
    life a bit ;P

    Best wishes,
    DD
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