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Reviews for Final Fantasy 4 - Phantom World

By : VGSS
  • From ANON - Stitches on July 12, 2006
    Anonymouse 2005-09-21 id # 2035416537
    Rather...interesting. Do the male summoners have to do the same thing? I feel sorry for them...

    OMG, dude, I know. That'd be pretty fucked up...

    Awesome fic, btw, VGSS.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2005
    I like how she's so innocent at first, but by the end, you portray Rydia as the one in control as she seeks out the monsters to summon on the Outside.
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on September 21, 2005
    Rather...interesting. Do the male summoners have to do the same thing? I feel sorry for them...
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  • From ANON - mysticneko on August 02, 2005
    O.O Damn... I would be so distrubed if that happened to me.
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  • From ANON - vgss on June 17, 2005
    Yep, I thought of that, but I was just running out of synonmys for "phantom beast" and decided to indulge myself a little.

    One of my biggest peeves is when I find myself using the same terms repeatedly. It's especially hard for certain body parts (hair, eyes, legs) without getting too fluffy. I think the slight breach of theme was worth it.
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  • From ANON - takoyome on May 22, 2005
    I like. :) It's well-written and enjoyable. I only have one niggle - they're not called aeons in the FFIV universe. I think canonically they can be called monsters, summoned monsters, summoned beasts, or phantom beasts. The word "aeon" isn't even mentioned once in the game - and only in FFX, at that.
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  • From ANON - Chi...again! on April 12, 2005
    ...urgh...can't spell! Previous post was meant to be 'look forward to you posting another story!'
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  • From ANON - Chi on April 12, 2005
    Wow! That was brilliant!! Loom forwward to you posting another story!! ^^
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  • From ANON - vgss on March 11, 2005
    Yeah, I know . I hate it when people are right :)

    I just started including summaries and storycodes in the actual story text since the beginning of this year, and today went back and updated all the copies on my hard drive before re-publishing them on my new website. Unfortunately, AFF never had a "beast" tag (or I missed it), and it would a *lot* of work to go to every place I've published and edit all the stories. For the future, though, I'm taking your (and the others who've said similar) suggestion to heart.
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  • From ANON - Lina Inverse on November 30, 2004
    You really should provide warnings for this. Some people don't want to read about bestiality.
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  • From Streti on January 04, 2004
    Boy, does she get around! A very nice idea and a well written story. The pissing part lessens the quality, though.

    I myself did not think that the Land of Monsters would quicken growth, but instead that time passed quicker there. Also, while Rydia is one of my favorite characters, it's the adult Rydia, so I would've preferred passing on the teenage Rydia and letting a grown up Rydia do the deed. There were nice bits of humor in the story though, Ramuh's scene especially was funny. Nice parody of that old geezer. I liked Odin's scene too - for tig cig cumshot. I'd always like to see more messy cumshot scenes in good fics.
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