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Reviews for Eternal Fall

By : HotaruReborn
  • From AngelMeiru on January 05, 2009
    Well, the concept is a good one, but you need to work on character development. Sure, Sephiroth was well developed, but everyone else seemed so one dimentional. I'm not putting down your work, I think you can tell a good story. Just practice with developing your characters okay hun?
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  • From Usagi546 on July 23, 2008
    This was an amazing story. I enjoyed reading it, even looked forward to finding time to read it. You say that you're going to make a sequel? I can't wait for it and I bet it will be just as good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2007
    This was moving to the point of non-return, thank you so much for writing it ! Who knows why I especially liked that you changed "Sephy" to "Sephiroth" right after Wutai war, seemed like he matured~
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  • From SeveredWing on February 20, 2007
    I've never had my emotions so manipulated reading a story in all my life! I had to turn off the computer after reading Chapter 2, and making it to the end of Chapter 3 was nearly as difficult. Does your reader get any relief by the end? I'd like to think things couldn't get worse for him, but you know they do. Excellent writing!
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  • From SeveredWing on February 20, 2007
    That was one of the most gripping and heartwrenching first chapters I have ever read. My eyes welled up with tears! I'm anxious to continue reading, but terrified as well. It's the strangest feeling. Be assured, I'll be reading chapter 2 the moment I finish this review, which incidentally is the first I've ever written on this site. Only one other story on this site has affected me in such a way, but yours is the first that has compelled me to write a review.

    Do not be surprised if you see my name attached to a review in the following chapters.
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  • From ANON - arora_kayd on January 01, 2006
    What is with fanfics making me cry lately?!

    That was truely amazing. I had kept up with this fic since it started but got out of habit. I finally got around to re-reading it and finally finishing it. And i'm so glad i did. You are an amazing writer. Your characters are so engaging adn well thought out. They don't deviate. I love your zack. He's so much fun ^-^

    i don't know what else to say other than Wow. And i'm ever so glad that your planning a sequel. I'll be able to sleep now ^.^ Everybody needs hugs.

    Thank you so much for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Misha on December 16, 2005
    I wish to inform you that you are simply an amazing writer, and I want to throw in some more adjectives about how awesome your skills are, but that will fill a lot of space.

    I have never actually cried while reading a fanfic until I read Eternal Fall.
    The day after I finished reading it I was in such utter shock, I actually took a few days off of school because the skill and effectiveness of your writing abilities put me into such a sad mood (Sephiroth is an innocent and did not deserve what happened to him)

    I look forward to a sequel if you are planning one.

    Thank you.




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  • From ANON - sephykoi on November 02, 2005
    O.O

    *is an uber Sephiroth freak (read: fan), and is so completely stunned and tear streaked from numerous bouts of crying that she fails to know what to say*

    I hate Jenova. I reallllllllllllllly do. (My poor Sephy!!! Nooooooooooooo~~~~~~~~~ *bursts into tears all over again IRL*)

    *wails & sobs more*

    Oh GODS that was beautiful~!!!! TToTT *sobbing*


    ::Hours later::

    *still crying*

    Can't wait to read... a sequel and... *sniffs* possibly more chapters now. Shit, I can't see straight -- eyes blinded by tears.

    ~the Seph
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  • From ANON - Lord Ickarous on October 21, 2005
    You know, i have never been one for crying but in this case i couldn't help it. Wow.
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  • From ANON - SiriusReborn on September 30, 2005
    Thanks for the comments guys! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :) I hope to write many more stories in the future!
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  • From ANON - nihilatrix on September 29, 2005
    I have to say this story not only caught my attention, but held on to it like a vise. You've managed to make me laugh, cry, swear at my computer screen, and on a few occasions, physically nauseous...And that's not a criticism, it's a tribute to your skill. A number of things made me extremely uncomfortable at times, but that is the way life is. If people can't handle the extremely adult situations here, they shouldn't be reading this anyway...And they should also remember that ignoring the bad things that people are capable of won't make them go away. I loved the way that you showed how even through the systematic, brainwashing abuse Sephiroth remained essentially innocent, in spite of how deeply damaged he was...It took a full demonic possession to drive him from himself and turn him to the evil being he became. I especially loved the little storylet at the end of the author's note..That had me nearly yelling "Go get him Vincent! Rip off Hojo's head!" , and various other violent things at the screen...eh..my fangs are showing again!
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  • From ANON - Crystal Cat-chan on September 29, 2005
    *Swallows hard and hugs Vinny-chan* It's over? it can't be over! No non noN!!!!!!!!!!! *Sniffles. [etting Vinny* Sephy never comed back for Vinny, not good...Nuh uh, Not at all! *Shakes her head, wondering off*

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  • From ANON - atOmicSquid on September 29, 2005
    Well, I finally finished reading the whole thing.
    I loved it...absolutely LOVED it.
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  • From wickedorin on September 28, 2005
    Even if it's an author's note, it's nice to see this story remain around.
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  • From ANON - Drac on September 28, 2005
    You... Are... doing... a... vinnie story?

    Please say yes... PLEASE! Because I will love you until the end of time!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *bows down in worship*
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