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Reviews for Clumsy

By : Thorne
  • From ANON - Ranna on January 10, 2007
    I like your descriptions, the focus more on what the characters are feeling than on the actual smut. It's an interesting style that really helps the reader get into their heads. Keep on writing.
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  • From Dvana on February 06, 2006
    Oh, and the bit about waiting at the end was inspired. The perfect ending. (just thought I'd add that, lol)
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  • From Dvana on February 06, 2006
    Heavy language here, almost too heavy at times; there were times where the thick prose actually got in the way of the emotional content. Other than that.? Fabulous, with strong emotional content and a quite dreamy atmosphere; the sex was a compliment. Beautifully done. And the characters were very much themselves! -gasp- ^^ Definitely something I would read again, and is there any better compliment for a written piece? Bravo.
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(not logged in) on November 08, 2005
    That was beautiful. So bittersweet but lovely and aching and just mournful at the same time. It... it was just so heart-wrenching powerful but so sad at the same time. I read it a year ago, and it still slices so deep to the core how actions can say a million different things then words ever could.
    *raises wine glass* Plus it's depressing to boot, but that's quite alright! Huzzah!
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  • From ANON - To Lazy to log in on April 30, 2005
    I really wanted to log in for this but I'll re reveiw this later with my name! I love Vincent X Cloud and you delievered ot home and it wasn't trash either. This so goes beyond the commom smut please continue to write such beatiful works of art.
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  • From ANON - Lillie on February 06, 2005
    Wow! This is great. I loved the way nothing was hurried, not even the sex. I'd like to add my thanks to Twig and Catt for encouraging you to post this. It would have been a shame if you hadn't. A very enjoyble read all round. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Pyrasaur on February 02, 2005
    Mmm, what a lovely mental image, these two and your writing.... The metaphor and attention to detail and characterization all work wonderfully. I've been reading this over and over and I'm always lulled into a warm, content and slightly awed state. Truly a great piece of fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Jade-kun on June 01, 2004
    It took me some time to read this story, but I finally got to finish it. I really don't know what to say about it. But I felt that I had to review because, well because...I don't know! It really earned one. I can't say much about the story. I mean hell what can you say about something so...tifutiful. I really believe that the story was beautiful. You are an extreamly good writer. And all I can say is that this piece was just....beautiful.


    ~*Jade-kun /*The Goddess of Darkness**~
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  • From ANON - Jita on March 01, 2004
    This really is an awesome story!

    The way you write and describe is just totaly great!

    Good work!
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on February 19, 2004
    Does the word WOW even describe this? I don't think so, but I can't really think of anything else right at the moment.
    That was simply an amazing read . . . very detailed and thorough, it put you right into Cloud's mind throughout the whole thing and really made you feel. Thank you so much for such a beautiful and touching gift of literature.
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  • From ANON - Nervachu on February 16, 2004
    Hey, I never review fics, but i couldn't not with this one. You're my first ever review. Feel special? I loved it, I love your style of writing, you make it all seem so real, not sugar coated or anything, and you captured their personalitys exactly. Very touching story. It's kinda refreshing to find something so good out there.

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  • From ANON - ^_^ on February 15, 2004
    That was amazing ^_^ Very touching.
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  • From ANON - noxxxxshinigami on February 13, 2004
    Very good. Real good writing and good charactarization. No need to say more. Just perfect.^-^

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