Reviews for Heartless

BY : Cathrine

  • From Starstop on January 18, 2007

    i like it i hope you update it. it is differnt.

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  • From ANON - Simon A. Erif on August 24, 2006

    I really like this story but I have to say... use spell check. You have some very interesting spelling mistakes and typos and stuff. It's not hard on the eyes but it's a bit annoying. The story is great and it would be even more enjoyable without the spelling errors and typos.

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  • From currie on April 09, 2004

    It's kind of... icky. :S
    Oh, and remember to start a new paragraph when a new person talks. :)

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  • From ANON - Frost on April 09, 2004

    Well, you probably (and hopefully) already know how I feel about this fic, but since you were the only one to review my Last Exile fic, "A light in the sky", when I published it at, I kinda feel obligated to make it official how much I like this fic, and the other fics you have written. I laughed when you let me pre-read "Heartless", and I laughed as I read it over again. Well done! Keep up the good work, boku no otomo-daichi... ^^

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  • From ANON - on April 09, 2004

    Email me when u update. Oh yea this is to cute.

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  • From ANON - hopeness on April 08, 2004

    It keeps getting better!!!!

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  • From ANON - hopeness on April 07, 2004

    : dies :
    The end of chapter two was great!!!

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  • From ANON - Jessica on April 07, 2004


    I LOVE IT!!!! *huggles into oblivion*

    So far so good! =D YOU RULE!!!


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