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Reviews for Resurrection

By : ZombieDuke

From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2008
From the sound of it, I'm fairly sure "MaddiChan" is speaking from previous experience. And what better way to amuse yourself when you're a terrible author and no one wants to look at the crap you write?--than go and attack perfectly good authors. I love this story (the Vincent/Zack probably won me over forever xD) and I can't wait until you update again! Hannah is so sweet, and you definitely got me in tears when Vincent found the baby.

You've got something great going here and I'm anxiously waiting for more!

mizubenten.
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From mls on December 29, 2007
Love this story can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Weezer on April 10, 2007
Gotta say, neat story. I can't wait for another chapter and I loved the way you responded to your flamer at the end of chapter 13. Very cool.
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From SeveredWing on April 03, 2007
How could you possibly COMPLAIN about Sephiroth and Zack wanting to *clears throat* fuck you all the time?! Is the man daft or something? I'm sitting with the window wide open to cool the air down in the room, because the temperature has suddenly risen to an intolerable level despite the weather being mild AND have so far finished off a half gallon of chocolate milk and am now working on my second in order to satisfy my raging female hormones! Whew. Now I'm out of breath as well.

Granted, when you're pregnant, you're not exactly always in an amorous mood, especially in your first trimester... but it's SEPHIROTH and ZACK! I think I would make some concessions! Many, many concessions. Anyway, enough ranting. I LOVE the story so far! You definitely should win awards for ingenuity! My apologies for not reviewing prior to this chapter, but when I finish one, I automatically hit "Next Chapter". It's become a reflex, but something had to be said after completing this one. I'm not getting up from the computer until I reach Chap 13!
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From ANON - Lotus Nyko on December 16, 2006
Okay so Cloud's a whore. Is it because that when women are pregnant they are looking for that comfort and it usually comes out in the form of some type of sex? I hope so. Also,I like the overall progress of the story. And as for the flamer, one would think that if Cloud was pregnant everything would obviously be OOC. I was expecting it and was satisfied. Now then, please update soon.
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From ANON - MateriaGirl on October 25, 2006
I Think the horny Sentient naughty planet wants to recycle the gang and have them fuck and make babies, thus our favorite pretty boy messiah hero/heroine and whore gets to bare the child of the Beautiful risen Angel/God Sephiroth...a fertility ritual to bring new life to the planet.

So go for it... baby...your writing and humor are terrific....keep writing don't let the English and spelling Freaks discourage you
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From ANON - MateriaGirl on October 25, 2006
I Think the horny Sentient naughty planet wants to recycle the gang and have them fuck and make babies, thus our favorite pretty boy messiah hero/heroine and whore gets to bare the child of the Beautiful risen Angel/God Sephiroth...a fertility ritual to bring new life to the planet.

So go for it... baby...your writing and humor are terrific....keep writing don't let English and spelling discourage you
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From ANON - JulieDoc on October 19, 2006
Yikes. Just realized that the "Go, go, Zombie" above might be construed as a Power Rangers reference. It isn't. A Rob Zombie reference, actually. I have to quit telling jokes I think everyone will get just because I do. (hangs head and ducks away like the dork she is.)
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From ANON - JulieDoc on October 18, 2006
This is an absolutely fascinating piece of work. Like most of your other reviewers, I agree that it's funny. My main fascination with it, though, is seeing how all the various mysteries in it work out. Cloud's pregnancy, Sephiroth and Zack being alive, and now this fascinating prophecy angle. I am quite fond of the occult, and you have me very interested. I caught a few typos here and there, (but I couldn't tell you anything right off the bat, I'm not that anal about those kind of things), but nothing major. You write very well. That's actually quite rare in humorous fics (I suppose due to being so excited about the jokes one wants to tell that one will ignore exactly how the words are put together.) You should be proud. I actually really like OOC Sephiroth fics, because I'm fond of him, so don't apologize for OOC work (even jokingly). I actually think there's not really an OOC way to write Vincent, since so little is known about him. Given a chance to let his emotions show, who's to give any "official" rules on how they might manifest? Not me. (Actually, I'm just pleased to see Vincent, especially his interaction with Hannah. Very sweet. I found it touching that my favorite vampire gunman would want to spare her pain. I thought that was totally IN character, myself.)

All in all, I must say please continue, that your flamers should have a great big serving of brown betty with DEATH (or, in other words, that they should eat death), and go, go Zombie (sorry, I couldn't resist). -JulieDoc
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From ANON - maiafay (not logged in) on October 17, 2006
Nice story so far, and I felt the need to say something about your loss. I'm very sorry for whomever passed away, and my heart goes out to you. AS for your fic, I can tell you're getting better, little improvements here and there. Characters are thought out and not shallow--granted, yes OOC, but sometimes its nice to see a different side to people, especially if well done.

Sorry for the flames...just had a war of my own over in the Resident evil section. I gave a constructuve critique to the "orchestra" story there, and a bunch of the authors friends jumped on my ass. It carried over to Rare actually, but now its over with. (all over some criticism...*eye roll*)

Anyway, lovely fic, and if you can spare the time....sometime--hop over to (Silent Hill) Blood ties and tell me what you think.
Carrie
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From Hana1997 on October 14, 2006
I was quite happy when I noticed you'd finally updated. As with all your stories, this one has been quite engaging. It has been quite a treat seeing the situation spiraling out of control from everyone's point of view. The bit with Hannah, while quite unexpected, lent the story an edge that, while disturbing, was a welcome change of pace. I very much would like to see you continue this. ^_^
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From ANON - MaddiChan on October 01, 2006
Wow, the characters are OOC, big time, lmao. Also, your reviews are funny. Next time you review yourself, try not to make it blantantly obvious. (Either that or your fangirls are pretending to be other people...)
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From ANON - malcara on July 24, 2006
yay!!I love this story!^^ its very original......but....i wanna find out how cloud was able to get pregnant in the first place it bothers me when ppl just randomly make a character pregnant without a logical explanation.....although in this story it sounds like it might have something to do with the planet or ares......also how are zach and sephiroth alive??? it would be nice to have an explanation for that as well.....all in all though if it makes me want to know those things then its really good ^^ its really well written though....you wouldn't believe the grammar atrocities that are out there.....spelling erors don't matter that much (when you type fast there are bound to be a few....)but some fics its like they don't even speak english!!!.........it was really refreshing to read keep up the good work and update so i can read more!!^^
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From ANON - anya on June 27, 2006
holyfuckingmother, this is unbelievably funny!!!
lol, how the heck did cloud manage to have a thing with almost everyone? ah well...

is cloud gonna have quadruplets or something? who were the kids that he saw??

i absolutely love your stories (despite frequent grammatical errors... or is it just my comp?), you should definitely write some more!!!

keep me on your update list? :]

loves
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From ANON - myrrh fae on February 02, 2006
Heya. It's been a long time since I've seen ya, probably because I usually hang out around the Naruto fanfiction now.

Anyway, I just wanted to congratulate you on a job well done. A holy shit!-well done job. Really. A great leap of skill from what I remember and magnificent twisty plots.

I love the little twists in each character even though I've never really played the game.
Cloud seems a whole lot more confident than from before in your one-shots. Zack seems a little bit sadistic and creepy. Did you base him from someone real?

Keep up the good work.
Myrrh fae.
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