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Reviews for Nightmare under Bevelle

By : Foley
  • From ANON - Maya on June 11, 2005
    i enjoy'd it somewhat but it was bit lacking, I think there should be more to the plot than just Seymour wanting Auron.
    question why does him? Go deeper into the mind of the mad measter. If I were you I' d make a little side fic to this, something like this: 10yrs ago a 25 yr old auron meets 18 yr old Seymour, Braska as not yet return from a long trip, and hasn't yet annouced his quest to defeat sin. Auron is left longing for his campanion since childhood, but some how this young guado reminds him of his beloved Braska. Tension high and fueled with frustion of his friends abscence, longing to fill this void Auron meets Seymour and desprate act the become deeply and intensly intament. But only it was only a one night stand for Auron, however Auron is Seymours first, well you get the idea...

    You enjoyed it some what... Uhhh huh. Next time don't even bother leaving a review. Because you see... You didn't even leave a name or any contact--how am I suppose to chew your head off without that? I didn't want to make a side fic to this. It wasn't meant to go any further--This was a SHORT story. Do you know what those are? The very fact that you cannot spell intimate tells me so. Since I work on plausible logic, your little scenario doesn't quite add up in my book. It sounds like you're the only one that wants a "side fic". Why don't you write it. I won't read it, but I'm sure there will be others that will. Yay for them. "Somehow the young guado reminds him of his beloved Braska?" Where did that come from? Are you suggesting that Auron had a thing for him as well? He wanted to have sex with Seymour because he reminded him of his Summoner? Sure thing. Not to mention that any pre-meetings of the two is completely out of line. Auron was in Bevelle and didn't see Seymour until Guadosalam. Go here: http://auronrevolution.com/legend/main.html Keep in mind this was based on an In game situation. Kthxbye.
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  • From ANON - sage hakoru on March 23, 2005
    No! Auron, my baby! **snarls and hisses at Seymour** sexy..nice job. I love seeing poor Auron get dominated. Really great work. There's a little trouble with spelling and spacing here and there, but other than that it's pretty good. You did an interesting job portraying Seymour, very unique. ;.; poor auron...sweet, sweet auron. **huggles him**
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  • From ANON - nicki on January 09, 2005
    grest story hey email me when you update k

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  • From ANON - Riyoko on October 14, 2004
    Ooooooo this is very interesting. I love it!! Wonderful job. I hopeyou update soon. I can't wait to see what will happen!!^_____________________^ Great job!!!
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