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Reviews for Three Of Us

By : Nikki666
  • From Rina76 on September 25, 2008
    Really, really fucking good. You are an astoundingly, frighteningly talented writer. What happened in this fic and how the boys behaved was at times utterly terrifying and achingly gorgeous and I LOVED it all. So very much. Your descriptive skills are bloody fantastic and Bob was great; immensely enjoyed his POV. Poor bastard! I think your characterisations of the 3 boys were spot-on. Kadaj was simply perfect.

    You should write books for a living. You'd make a killing out of it! ;)
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  • From SavannahMarie on October 01, 2007
    Mad props.
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  • From AkitoSouma on January 30, 2007
    That...was beautiful. That was perfect. Every other story I've read on here has had some mistakes, but this one, aside from a few spelling and grammar errors that did not detract from the story, was flawless. And the ending made me want to cry. Good job on this. I even liked the original characters. ^_^ They were corrupt enough to be believable.
    The way you portrayed the three brothers was very realistic, and there was so much emotion that each one expressed in his own, unique way. You captured the frightening aura that surrounds them, and I was actually trembling! The description of how they were all different parts of Sephiroth made a lot of sense. But the ending really killed me. It was too glorious to be believed. In the end, they were no one but themselves. Wow....
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  • From ANON - dreamcatcher on August 12, 2006
    You're writing style is wonderful. So full of description and imagery. Wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - krimson on June 20, 2006
    Wow, that was just wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Ly on June 14, 2006
    Such a sad story really, but very beautifully written.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2006
    What a great story!
    I really liked it, and I loved the names of the thugs in the bar.
    The characterisation is a bit off, but completely understandable if you've never seen the movie. But I still like the way you wrote the brothers.
    I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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  • From ANON - kasey on October 03, 2005
    hehe you named someone bob hehe
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  • From ANON - Leoth on October 03, 2005
    Yadaa! That was so good, i luved it!
    i expecially liked the wording in it ^_^!
    pls write more!
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  • From ANON - nihilatrix on October 02, 2005
    I just reread this story for the 3rd time, after seeing Advent Children...And I still love it just as much as I did the first time. The characters are in my opinion, very in character, and the story is very well written. That said, consider yourself scolded...For not updating since APRIL!! I Know that there has to be more to this story than just one long chapter!
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on October 01, 2005
    This is more than I expected any AC fic to be. Your english is very strong. There were only one or two minor errors that caught my eye and nothing that severely detracted from the narration. The description is well-done, precise and matter-of-fact, fitting well with the points of view. Telling the story through Bob's eyes was a masterful stroke and a great way to introduce the SHM. The action sequences were well-timed and the accompanying emotion had that air of complete shock and shut-down.

    You handled Kadaj's youth in an extremely interesting way. He's distinctly not quite right in the head. His eagerness to grow up, to be able to do more mature things, fits his age perfectly, as does his nearly tyrannical use of power. Yazoo's mixed love and loathing came over well as did the general sense of lonely purpose and longing from all three of them. This was a very entertaining fic to read and I hope to see more work from you.
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  • From ANON - Emerald Embers on September 12, 2005
    That was just too awesome. Seriously. If there was a meter that could measure awesomeness, it would have exploded in response to this story. Being as my current knowledge of Advent Children is slim to nothing I can't comment on whether the characterisation matches the characters themselves, but I don't need that to know this is a good story. Or strike that, an amazing story. The portrayal of an imbalanced mind through Kadaj and a completely reasonable but utterly tortured mind through Yazoo is... astounding. The weird, part nightmare and part sweet relationship between them all is beautifully written. And you have written one of two scenes of violence in a fic (and I've been reading fic for over seven years now) that hasn't made me bored or squeamish. It was perfect.

    You are an utterly amazing writer :).
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  • From ANON - Trepidation on September 04, 2005
    Are you going to do one when he does get olf enough to have Yazoo? That would be too awesome. Please write more! I loved it to pieces.
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  • From ANON - Audrey on August 25, 2005
    That was a great story, very hot. You're English was perfect, I refuse to believe you're not a native speaker. lol. I hope you write more stories, there's not enough of these boys out there yet. ^^
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  • From ANON - Unknown on July 02, 2005
    That was hot...REALLY hot,nice detail too !^-^
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