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Reviews for Unexpected

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - kk on June 17, 2009
    *fans self* whew!

    excellent work, this is going into my favorites. :)
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  • From ANON - nekozuki on December 04, 2007
    Great job! That was one of, if not the, best FFVIII fic I've read, with my favorite couple, too. =) You did a great job of setting up the scene, and, wow, the action was simply amazing. I guess next time, Rinoa'll be more willing to kill Propagators...
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  • From ANON - trunks2585 on September 29, 2007
    Ok i might be a little bit biased on this, considering i actually cosplay as squall, but i think you did an amazing job on 'Unexpected' Squall and Rinoa seemed very in character to me, like how he was so pissed about the bloodspray and goo in the beginning, or not being sure how to feel about Rinoa peeping on him. Which I can see her as the type to peep on the guy she has a crush on as well.

    The sex scene itself was nicely executed, it was tastefull to not drive away readers that want something more than 'insert rod and into slot b' yet dirty enough to keep people that want smut and want it fast reading.

    If i had to recomend anything it would have been more dialogue, but otherwise a great S/R lemon.
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  • From ANON - llirium on April 12, 2007
    Wow. I got swept away with this fic. There wasn't anything too romantic about it, but then, sometimes you just.. well.. gotta. ^_-
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  • From ANON - gothic girl on December 10, 2005
    i liked it a bunch the only thing that i didnt really like was the word cunt i liked how you used venus though that was a good idea well i hope to read more later on bye

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  • From ANON - General Wyvern on September 19, 2005
    I don't see a lot of RinoaXSquall pieces. Now why is that? I would like to see more. The story ran smooth, the grammer...well...I don't pay much attention to grammer, it was one of the better short peices I'v read, I'd say.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2005
    It was Unexpected.And GOOD!!!
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  • From ANON - Not here on May 30, 2005
    my faveorite lemon..write more...
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  • From ANON - darksaber on May 14, 2005
    Yes, please don't be afraid of doing some het. I love FF8 but I'm not one who cares for yaoi/slash, so seeing ANY FF8 het is great. This is good and I'd deffinitely love to see more.
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  • From ANON - Evil Karyta on May 14, 2005
    It's nice to find a little Squall/Rinoa paring once in a while. I think it's a lovely couple and it's really too bad they don't have much popularity in fanfictions. I must say the setting was used often, but the add of a bathroom was... well, to my point of view farfetched for a realistic fanfic, but well done for you story. Your writing style needs more work, but it's a good start, though I'm really not a fan of vulgar naming of sexual organes. I read some creative metaphors in this fic that shows me you're working hard. In all, it's a good work and you should keep writing, you have talent and potential.
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  • From ANON - hrehfr on May 14, 2005
    cool
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  • From ANON - QueenAdreena (can\'t be arsed to log in) on May 12, 2005
    Wow, you should definately take up het writing too. This was good, and you made it totally believable, not like other Squall and Rinoa fics i've come across (not that there's many) I love m/m but theres soooo much of it, this was a welcome change!
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  • From ANON - Mai Naotaki on May 11, 2005
    Meeep! I just love it! Keep it up!
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