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Reviews for Ever get the feeling you're being watched?

By : MackyoStar
  • From writeright on August 29, 2005
    Fun story. I love your Rufus. *Slaps with fish* More, now.

    CP the content
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  • From ANON - Brittny on August 25, 2005
    Lol. My Mom acts like Rufus when she is at work.
    So I can sorta relate to his stress..
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix2qt on August 24, 2005
    this is pretty cool, i dont know why you jibber on about not being able to write... theres a few spelling errors a few grammer mistakes.. BUT WHO THE HELL CARES... just because it isnt technically correct doesnt make it bad. the ideas behind it are strong, and you have made the characters act and speak in the way that they actually would.. none of this making tseng a nancy boy, or making Rufus feminine... anyways great story look forward to reading more... just dont cock up on any of the upcoming love scenes if you write any *grins* you know what i mean.


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