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Reviews for Clone of You

By : User0007
  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2005
    Ok, nothing going on yet, and Kadaj isn't much present, I hope you're next one is gonna make up for this one. ^__^
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  • From ANON - littlenekoprincess on September 26, 2005
    kewl!!!!! loev the part at the end with the bet and all. keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Shadow_Dweller on September 17, 2005
    Woot another AC!!!, tis my lucky day :P Good Job hey...cant wait for Yazoo to come into it ^^ he is my fav character...along with Kadaj of course
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  • From ANON - Kadaaju on September 16, 2005
    Hmm.. Not bad for a begining, but in parts of the chapter, you left verbal text without an owner. Most people may not be able to figure out who is saying what to who, ya know? -Wrinkles his nose.- Chotto matte.

    || "Wait up... Hold your fucking horses here... are you telling me there are three of those goddamn things runnin' around makin' plans... to bring back that thing?"

    "Yes"

    "I'm finished with that fucking shit man! It's only been two years since we defeated that son of a bitch!"

    "So what? You're gonna let them just destroy the Planet because you couldn't be bothered!? Tell me Cid what have you been doing lately that’s sooo much more important than saving the existence of mankind? Oh right! That stupid plane you've been working on, hey can you start it yet?"

    "Listen you little shit! You don't know anything about my life so why don't you just go back to that hole you call Wutai and stay there" ||

    -Head tilt.- Who is saying what to who in this? Some people may not know that Yuffie is from Wutai, as rare as that could be, but there are other conversations in there.. Which is Barrets and which is Cids, ne? Just a bit of constructive critisism. No flame. Just.. You should probably give more of an indication as to who is saying what, ne? Other then that, I'd say you're at a good start. Keep the story coming. And.. The movie was great, don't you think? -Pets his copy of FFVII AC.- Saa, Matta ne. I'll be watching your story.


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  • From ANON - Audrey on September 15, 2005
    Yessss! Another AC fic. The fanfics are growing steadily. lol. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with much anticipation. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sharon on September 15, 2005
    Yes I agree there at not too many AC Fics out there. but this one souds a bit fun...but yes who is Cloud going to fall fore Sephiroth or Kadaj?...and yes I do think RenoXRudy would make a cute couple beside the big Jealousy of Tifa if she founds out...ah all I'll say to you now is good luck with this one.
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  • From ANON - Siamh on September 14, 2005
    WOW! I can't wait to read more! I just finished watching the movie! YES! I am sooo happy! My wallet on the other hand...... damn imports. Anyway I really want to read more and I hope you update soon! I really need to read more fan fiction on Final Fantasy Advent children! The best movie out there!
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Aya on September 13, 2005
    I think this is really interesting ^__^ There are so few AC fics out it makes me happy to know there are those who like it!
    Anywaaay.... that little Reno thing was so amusingly random. And Cloud's sucha little sweetie XDD
    I'll be checking back for the next time you update!!
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