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Reviews for Would you?

By : ZombieDuke
  • From ANON - Komikitty on October 25, 2005
    Poor Cloud! Aw don't depress yourself, well...not needlessly anyway. =^_^=
    Great work! *moves on to next chapter*
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on October 20, 2005
    Another great chapter. I loved the whole ‘two faces’ part you did on this! That one sentence, explains so much!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2005
    O.O Damn.... I LIKE!!! Angst is good. Depression is good. Your way of writing/format thingie is AWESOME!!! ^0^ Whoot!
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  • From ANON - squalmasy on October 15, 2005
    ^o^ Oooohh, that was so cute. Again, I love this clever style you have of not actually saying much of what's going on. It's kind of abstract, and hard to understand until the ending, when everything seems to click. Maybe I'm just stupid, though. o_o;

    Write more, if you can! O_O And you don't have to be depressed to write depressing fics! Is it strange that depressing fics make me happy? >> Maybe it is...
    loved it!!!!

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  • From ANON - Kumi on October 13, 2005
    (It's a...repost, because apparently the other one didn't go through...)
    NOO!! I have such a sensitive, sappy little soul...;_; *sniff* I could cry buckets over a simple deathFic - that's why, for the most part, I avoid these type of stories.

    But I couldn't help myself, seeing that it was written by you! My hand automatically hovered over the link and went "clickity".

    Now for this here story, you have a *very* perculiar style (it's different from the one in Christmas in July, anyway) - the way you leave things not fully exploited is...!! It hurts and it makes me cry knowing what happened/you intended to show inbetween the lines!!

    Don't die nooo!!! ;_; *sobs, then runs off crying in a corner*
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  • From ANON - Kumi on October 13, 2005
    >_
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on October 13, 2005
    *Blinks, gasps and falls off chair* Well that was unexpected. You actually made me gasp. Good job! It was good to see the dark side of your writing. Nicely done.
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  • From wickedorin on October 13, 2005
    I think I may have enjoyed that a little too much. *grin* What can I say, vague angst is a great thing... especially if it's got to do with obsessive love.
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  • From on October 12, 2005
    Yay for suicide! Wait... No! Suicide is bad, so bad. Poor Cloudy! Sometimes, to chase your dreams or to be forced to go after what people want you to is so different... No one understands you, and you're lost.

    Yay for suicidal people! They're the only brilliant ones, though it usually becomes a waste.

    Hope you come out with more. This is a more poetic, yet storytelling, way to put everything. I quite love it. And the way you put it into segments isn't blasphemous as other people usually put it! Bravo 'n encore!
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  • From ANON - squalmasy on October 12, 2005
    OMG T_T Again, short as it was....LOVE IT TO DEAAAAAAATH. Your style is so entrhalling...you don't describe what's happening explicitly, but I can totally feel it! THAT'S WICKED RAD! //loves you//
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  • From ANON - Komikitty on October 12, 2005
    O_O Bwa...wha-? no! Cloud! Sephi? oi..maaa...
    *blinks*
    Yes that was depressing, this better not be all there is! *threaten threaten*
    pweeeaaassse? *puppy dog eyes*
    =^_^=
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  • From Cindyip on October 07, 2005
    I know what you mean about the 'italics', anyway so glad you finally wrote more Seph/Cloud, though this is definitely darker than your other ones^_^;;
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  • From on October 06, 2005
    Good, good! :D

    Italics work the same if you do the file transfer as if you hadn't.
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  • From ANON - person on October 06, 2005
    ... >:D Freaking awesome. Sugoi. Yoko dekimashita. *twisted smirk* In my opinion, that was so cute. Yeah, I think stuff like that is cute. I'm screwed in the head. That doesn't stop that fic from being ownage incarnate.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on October 06, 2005
    Ohh so good to see you back and writing!! Wow this was deep! I really liked this. It gave me chills, hard to explain. Nicely done!!

    Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed
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