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Reviews for FFT Advance: Full Circle

By : BrightShadow
  • From KingOfHearts on January 03, 2007
    Nice work mang. The love scenes are descriptive and an excellent length, without the feeling of being dragged on.

    I'd like to see a Ritz/Shara, but that's just a humble request that will probably not happen. XDD

    Keep it up man!!
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  • From ANON - Fallen Seraph on October 23, 2006
    Hope you do get a better job. Rare to find fics from FFTA or FFT that area actually good to read.

    See ya later,

    Fallen
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2006
    I don't normally do this, but this is just such a great story! It has an extraordinary balance between plot and sex that is almost nonexistent in this kind of writing. Not only is it balanced, but the sex scenes are written better than most. Well, in conclusion, PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!

    P.S. - I would love to see what a Marche x Ritz pairing would look like if you wrote it.
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  • From ANON - vivilover69 on July 13, 2006
    Hey, why not write something with Babus having a little treat? You haven't even mentioned him in the story yet, to my knowledge.
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  • From ANON - shhh on January 27, 2006
    Finally, an FFTA fanfiction with sex, a plot, AND the game's main characters! What could be better?

    Oh. Wait. I think I know. Let's see if you write it or not.

    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - fallenSeraphim on January 14, 2006
    Great story. it cool how you take the other races and put them together.

    Wondering what happen to the ex-nutsy members when they went back home
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  • From ANON - DT/GP on January 10, 2006
    Well, finally getting over my review-shyness. Here goes...

    First of all, I really like the characters (and the complicated dynamics between them) that you've set up so far, and their personalities come through in the writing. Admittedly, I usually don't pay attention to that sort of thing in this sort of story, but the fact that I am in this one might be saying something... As for the "erotic" aspect, the sex scenes are thorough and well-written. The setup for some sections is, admittedly, somewhat clichéd (chapter one comes to mind...) but given the nature of this writing I can't really fault you for it. I would provide consctrucitve criticism, but no flaws that really hurt the story come to mind, so for now I'll just have to say "well done!"
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