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Reviews for Lightning.

By : KittyMeowMaxwell
  • From someonesneaky on January 21, 2013
    Wow... Has it really been six years?

    And after all this time, this still remains one of my all-time favorite stories. I just finished reading it again, and it's as good as I remembered.

    One thing, though -- One of you might want to go back and touch-up the formatting. It's gone a bit wonky. D:
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  • From ANON - Ranwed on October 02, 2007
    I laughed my heart out and then I cried my heart out.


    I absolutely adore the authors notes beginning every chapter, LMAO.
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  • From caramelkisses on September 25, 2007
    I'm REALLY glad I happened across this. Wow.
    This is, like, an alltime favorite of mine now. XDD
    I can't believe I read it all straight through.
    ...I like to point out random things I REALLY enjoyed[lol]:
    I LOVE this evil, manipulative, lying Squall. I've never actually read him like that before... He'd make a GREAT villian!
    ...'Forming peaks' is indeed, the stupidest baking directive EVER.
    I sort of wish Squally would've ended up happy, too... but I appreciate that the story didn't go offtrack for that to happen, especially since he was all evil. XDD To be completely honest. I think I love Squall so much in this because he acts the same way I did with my wife before she broke down and agreed to go out with me. XDDD

    Thanks for writing this.
    I had a great time reading this, and it's wonderfully done.
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  • From caramelkisses on September 24, 2007
    ::apologies for the million fangirl-esque reviews i'll probably leave.::
    Just wanted to comment that I LOVE Selphie in this, too! [drives me crazy how everyone goes out of thier way to make her seem annoying. >
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  • From caramelkisses on September 24, 2007
    T_T.
    I LOVE this story.
    For some reason. Irvine crying is just SO cute to me. I'd never imagined it before. And I LOVE Zell and Seifer working together!!!
    [::is only on chapter 7.:: I can't wait to finish!]
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  • From ANON - David Heaps on April 13, 2007
    Why do you hate Squall so much T_T Making him all evil and stalky like. Poor Squall.
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  • From ANON - David Heaps on April 12, 2007
    OH MY SWEET JESUS! I just read chapter 43 and i think i just did something that wasn't pee in my pants :O! Your storie is GREAT!
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  • From someonesneaky on February 22, 2007
    Not long ago, I somehow managed to read just about everything in FF7 that caught my attention. Being a quick reader and having too much free time means good stories are devoured quickly - sometimes /too/ quickly. So, out of boredom, I looked for something nice and long, and Lightning caught my eye.

    I've never played FF8, so I know very little of the actual plot or characters. I'd been trying to avoid stories in that area for that reason. I'm VERY glad I gave in, though.

    This is a marvelous story. The way the characters are portrayed, and the relationships between them all are excellent. As soon as I was done with the last chapter, I sat down and read the whole thing again almost immediately because I couldn't get enough of it. I'm kinda disappointed that you reached the end - but it's such a perfect ending that I really don't mind.

    Thank you guys for giving us such a marvelous story to entertain ourselves with!

    ~SneakyOne
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  • From RentaiKitten on February 11, 2007
    Waaaaaaaahhhhhhh! It's over! And it was so gooood to. Eagerly awaiting your next effort!

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  • From ravenesuna on February 03, 2007
    what happened to the real chapter 55 (in which zell must be dreaming)? i read it on ff.net but when i went to see it on here it wasn't there. it went to this chapter. :(
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  • From MNGoldenEagle on February 01, 2007
    This has got to be one of THE greatest FF8 yaoi fanfics I have ever read in my life. You two are an absolute delight in both your little commentaries and in your incredible literary talents. I literally was brought to tears when Irvine confronted Zell about the betrayal! Absolute gold. I would ask that you guys didn't end this story anytime soon, but seeing as how it's already fifty-some chapters long, I am simply thankful you've kept it up for so long! Thanks, gals, you're truly the best!
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  • From ANON - dancer_me on January 14, 2007
    Hey! No Fair! Way to deny us the the Irvine/Seifer Action! *whines and kicks feet* Gosh, the banana thing was too tempting for Poor Seif to get off his mind. Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I love it how I'm stalking this story..
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  • From ANON - Pyra on December 29, 2006
    THAT LAST BIT WAS HILARIOUSE!!!!!! I cant wait to see how this playes out!!! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Uh... on December 29, 2006
    Chapter the Fifty-Third: In Which Squall is Portrayed Wildly OOC.

    Uh, yeah. So, I realise I shouldn't take this fic very seriously at all, and that really no one in here is acting very in-character, but the way you two portray Squall is just pointless. Him being GAY in this fic is pointless. Now, I'm not some gung-ho Squall fan, in fact the character fairly annoys me, but WOW, put a little warning in next time. Seriously, you could change the names, stick this in the Originals section, and no one would be the wiser that this was ever a FF8 fanfic.

    Oh yeah, and about Irvine's speech patterns: I remember the 'like'; don't, however, remember him being a grammatically challenged moron.
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  • From ANON - Pyra on December 28, 2006
    OOOOOOOO!!!!! Maybe a hint of lust in Seifer for Irvine hmmmmmmmmmmm??????.....heheheheh...coant wait to see where this goes !!!!!!! ^.^
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