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Reviews for The Final Fantasy

By : Nasis
  • From ANON - MS on January 01, 2007
    Hey! I thought it was pretty good! (I'm not the best judge of OOC, since I haven't actually played FF, but I've read a lot of fics about it.) It's a good premise, and I know of at least one other Seph-Yuna pairing site. Keep up the writing!
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  • From Meili on July 28, 2006
    I think some reviewers miss the point of having a PWP. It wasn't too bad but probably next time use a character you are familiar with so the story will be better. :) Anyway, lemon fanfics are almost always OOC, especially for Sephiroth because he is insane.
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  • From ANON - Kattvinge on February 03, 2006
    Assholish - now that's a word I can use in the future... *lol*
    And don't mind the first reviewer... I think you did great. Fanfic are bound to be ooc no matter what. Since it's not in the show/book/game or what ever... yes, it will be ooc. So thumbs up baby, and keep on writing. And you know - there is a remove button you can use... *hrm* Sorry, I just do not approve with people that tends to bite the heads of authors, I can not mend with that at all... and remember - practice makes perfect, or so my grandma always said and she was the most wisest woman on earth. And I will always admire a person that dares to step out of the canon pairing and do something very different. So continue on, write odd couples and enjoy it. Sephiroth is a very hard character to describe but as I said, I think every story on this site is OOC, because it's not the original creators of the figuers that is presented here.

    Ok, I've been ranting long enough now.
    Carry on... *does the good-guy pose*


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  • From Delcat42 on November 06, 2005
    If you don't know anything about Sephiroth, why are you using him in a fanfic? The least you could do is do some basic research. Google yourself up a fanshrine or two, try Wikipedia. You don't have to play the game to at least know a few things about it.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 02, 2005
    hey, don't worry about them, everyone has to start somewhere. Kudos on trying something out-of-the-norm. Being different doesn't make something good, but it does mostly make for something more interesting. Not terrible for a first time. Keep working at it.
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  • From ANON - pixelmaya on November 01, 2005
    Wow..very interesting pairing. Hey, how bout using Sephiroth POV next time? I think would be nice. Gr8 work btw=)
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  • From ANON - Psuedonym on October 31, 2005
    Ah, attempted plot, like attempted suicide, poorly executed, and a failure. First of all, I must point out your sudden shift after the SECOND paragraph (I assume that was a paragraph) from third person into first. Did you type this all entirely into the submit form? Second, your Sephiroth is so entirely unbelievable that I am sure the people of SquareEnix would likely beat you to death for your misrepresentation, if they were made aware of it. Sephiroth, if you actually played the game, thought he was doing the best he could. Of course, your dialogue makes it quite clear that you had never even seen the casing for the game prior to writing this.

    Kindly stop torturing people with your sorry excuse for fan fics.
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