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Reviews for Vincent Comes Home

By : sailtheplains
  • From Jdee on July 03, 2008
    You kept me up with this... first off it was well written. It kept me reading till 3:30am in the morning.
    I had to leave to do grocceries but I cam right back to it like the addict I am...
    My friends all know I'm a Zack, Cloud/Tifa fangurl and rarey do I read anything with Vincent in it despite owning DoC...
    But I adored this fic. I love who you wrote for Reno he had me giggling half the time... and you really made the Reno/Yuffie thing work for me... Zet was believable and it was almost like she was part of their world, she wasn't making any goo goo eyes at anyone by chapter five... but I was rootin for her and Cid cause I felt it was worth it...
    As for the parts of Vincent's past it was written amazingly... the memories were like you had a real great grasp on his character.. I find Cloud and Vincent sooooo hard to write for... *has only written one proper FFVII fic anyways and it's before he's awake so doesn't count*

    It was sad that Cloud had to die and I was upset at this cause I'm such a fangurl... but it also struck how well you wrote his death and funeral and from their thoughts and emotions on it... I've experienced this loss and you worked with it soooo well.
    you've inspired to me to try to finish my FVII fic it maybe yaoi but you've made me want to finish it anyways... and start a het one...

    Keep up the good work ^^
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  • From butabara on July 08, 2007
    you know, I just found this one, and I HATE YOU!! or i love you. i can't decide. I haven't read a fan fiction that's made me cry in YEARS. This one was GOOD. by the end of the last chapter I was sobbing. you suck. and rock. sweetage.
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  • From ANON - Himself on September 24, 2006
    Great fic and all, but...

    I still think Tifa kinda got over Cloud and moved on wayy too easily.
    I mean, she DID lose the fucking love of her life, din' she?
    And I found Vincent moving in on her right after Cloud died kinda...immoral, yes?
    I know that his intentions were good, but still...
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  • From TheSmoothSeungsation on September 23, 2006
    And the BEST FANFIC EVER Award goes to...

    Best points:

    I loved the Free Willy reference "I'm gonna eat that fucking kid!"
    My absolute favourite chapter would have to be Ch 20. The whole Jenova messing with Cloud's head and saying shit to him was both spooky and fucking hilarious!
    I liked how you gave the Materia minds of their own.
    I loved it when Tifa called Aeris an "evil bitch" It was so uncalled for that it was funny LOL.
    The entire "food" conversation was hilarious.
    And the BEST INSULT Award goes to...Cid! ("What about you, Hotshit?")

    Now on to the bad-but-not-TOO-bad points:

    What was with all the M's? They were really starting to get on my nerves in the later chapters.
    And I am a zealous supporter of Cloti and I severely dislike impossible pairings i.e: Tincent. Then again, when it comes to fanfiction, nothing's impossible Aye?

    And that's just about it. Appart from those insignificant details, the whole fic rocked.

    BTW, was the George who owned the Materia shop the George Valentine that Jeremiah mentioned earlier?

    Good luck on your next project, looking foward to reading it.
    And remember my motto:

    "Cloti: The way it's meant to be."

    See? It rhymes.
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  • From ANON - Phill on July 11, 2006
    I really enjoyed this story. The wrighting was great expecially for your first full fan fic. I've never tried to wright one till recently but it's not the kind that wold be posted here. Well so far. It's more of a PG rateing due to language. You're work is great.
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  • From ANON - Digital_Demon on July 09, 2006
    That...was awesome...Seriously, you have to let me know (via E-Mail) every time you start another story. The end was....sad....but nonetheless, the story kicked all kinds of ass.
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  • From Pen-Versus-Sword on July 05, 2006
    Oh. My. God. Quite possibly the best-written fic I've seen--on any site--in a long, long time. The story is top notch. Your characterizations are wonderful, and, might I say, spot on. You must be the only person, besides yours truly, that writes Cid with a conscience and a heart. Thank you much for your story.
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  • From ANON - aceraven151 on January 28, 2006
    i haven't read this yet but im sure ull do fine, btw im a huge ff7 fan , ps. if u need any ideas email me and ill try

    aceraven151@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on January 23, 2006
    Mmm, I find myself feeling the right way about this ending in spite of myself. Warm and sad mixed together. Even separated by the lifestream, they're still all together as a family.

    Well done.

    T/C and S/A forever

    Ciao
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  • From DarkFae on January 23, 2006
    I. Actually. CRIED! sorry i've dissapeared lately, but when i came back, i was thrilled when i'd seen you'd posted so much! I'M SO SAD ITS OVER! a sequel maybe? an epilogue? ANYTHING?! its been so much fun to follow this fic through all of its improvements and development! i'll be on the lookout for your next project. REMEMBER: USE THE SHWARTZ!!!!!!!

    -nev
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  • From ANON - Femme Fatal on January 22, 2006
    Imagine, I don't check for a week, and I see up to chapter 33! It was a good story, with a pretty sad ending, but I liked it all the same (though I feel worse for everyone than Cloud). Looking foward to reading your next project!
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  • From on January 22, 2006
    Congratulations on completing your series! Something so long and complex was an ambitious choice for a first fic and a lot of people would have given up on it, but you're still going back and tweaking things after it's all posted.

    I know what you mean about chapters 31 and 32 seeming a tad fast, but I'm not sure exactly how. I can see Cid finally doing something about his relationship with Zet just to distract himself from grief. Maybe the chapters just need general elaboration on what's going on, what's in people's heads...? And I think chapter 28 would be stronger if it wasn't so careful about noting what everyone was doing at any given time. Vincent (or Nanaki, or whoever's POV it happens to be at the time) probably wouldn't be looking around and noticing everyone's reactions when there are more pressing things at hand. A character's POV is more powerful when we know what they know and no more -- it's like really slipping into their skin.

    Keep up the good, dedicated work, and best of luck on your future fics!
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  • From ANON - VahlanaAngel on January 21, 2006
    OMG! The last chapter made me cry, but it was great at the end. Give us more fics like this one, and you'll be rockin'even more. I've had writer's block for a few days, but now I'm ready to write more after reading this last chapter. YOU ROCK!!!! Let us know when your going to put another one up. :)
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  • From ANON - Ezekiel on January 21, 2006
    so endeth the greatest Final fantasy VII fic on Aff.
    not much to say but that i liked it and i will keep an eye out for your works in the future

    Keep up the damn fine job and remember: Phoenix downs are your friends... but they don't always work, i'm looking at you aeris Mehehehehe
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on January 19, 2006
    Aw damn. I see where this is going... *sigh* I guess if Aeris could never come back, we can't expect Cloud to.

    Or can we?

    Hmm, I'll keep tuning in to see. Still an awesome story to me either way, even though I'm way more T/C than T/V.
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