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Reviews for FF7: Love, Lust, and Need

By : Aydrian
  • From ANON - Silver Katana on August 31, 2006
    WOW *shudders & gasps in pleasure* That was soooo hot!

    Way to go *nods head with a BIG silly smile*
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  • From ANON - Aydrian on August 24, 2006
    I'm not telling. ;)
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  • From ANON - Ben, Himself on August 18, 2006
    Great fic, but I'm a little confused. Was Tifa just imagineing the whole sex in the shower scene or did it really happen?
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  • From ANON - squallfan on August 08, 2006
    I've read your story before and loved it. Really hot shower!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more TifaXCloud.
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on January 26, 2006
    Not a bad run at it. I thought your disclaimer was hilarious and the closeness of the family relationship was well done. You really should make an effort to correct your tense issues however, or get a beta reader who can help you with it. The constant switching is making what could be a really good fic into a poor piece. It was too distracting for me to really get into the action, which was well done in and of itself. Grammar does matter. Other than that, your style is okay, if a little basic and given to unnecessarily spelling everything out. It's good to see that you're actively writing the kind of story you'd want to read instead of complaining that other people aren't using their spare time to do it for you like I've seen some other people do.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiGirl on January 18, 2006
    Wow...that was hot!!!
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  • From ANON - gfd on December 19, 2005
    gfd
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    Wow!! That was awesome!! Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Buzzkilldestroy on December 09, 2005
    Good stuff my man.
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  • From ANON - bella07 on November 16, 2005
    very good story! awsome! you should keep it going a few more chappies! :D:D
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  • From ANON - Laini on November 16, 2005
    WOW i love it.yes i agree there are crappy tifa and cloud fics out there and ppl DO need to write more of them.wel i loved it so hopefully you'll come up w/ more ideas.^.^
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  • From ANON - Val on November 16, 2005
    Women fantasize about being raped? Otherwise interesting Cloti.
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  • From Aydrian on November 16, 2005
    Thanks for the comment. And yeah I've had that problem for years and I can't seem to break myself of the habit. Sorry for the annoyance.
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  • From ANON - Miriam on November 16, 2005
    This has potential--but maybe stick with one tense? Either present or past--but the shifting back and forth is distracting.
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