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Reviews for Stream of Memories

By : Hihana
  • From ANON - NeptuneClear on July 28, 2006
    Some typographical errors and grammatical errors... Also, at some points, you mixed up the colour of Kadaj's hair, refering to it as silver and such.
    Anyway, pretty interesting. I always thought Kadaj seemed a little too familiar with Cloud when they first run into each other in AC.
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  • From ANON - Ly on June 15, 2006
    Goodness, that was beautiful! Brought a tear to my eye.
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  • From ANON - Bubble on January 25, 2006
    has a good story, and good sex. damn i love it. you should continue to write cloudxkadaj fics. i know I would read them. thanks for this one.

    (I know my english is bad -sorry but I´m good reading english hehe lol)
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  • From chinohana on January 13, 2006
    OO i thought nii san meant big brother? who cares, this is so sweet! i need an inhaler, i need tp breath, it's not every day we get to read a good fic!
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  • From ANON - shanna66 on December 21, 2005
    please make more stories
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on December 18, 2005
    I think the plot was pretty well done and the emotion came over nicely. Kadaj's absolute innocence was a nice touch. The only thing I'd really have to complain about is a rather high incidence of grammatical and spelling errors. There were enough to interrupt the flow of reading but they didn't make understanding completely impossible. The descriptions were very nice, as was the background of Kadaj's plans with Jenova and his other brothers. It was really good to see that you didn't skimp on plot and development just to rush to the sex. Kadaj's attitude towards Cloud was sweet and the lemon was good. I enjoyed this story.
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