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Reviews for Challenge Fic 1

By : vivilover69
  • From ANON - Zidaryn on February 09, 2015
    YES!! This is a great story. Loved the lemon parts. Vivi is even more me now (I have Vivi as my Avatar on some sites). The only thing I don't like is the after comment at the end that seems to hint at Yaoiness. I can find it fun with some anal toys and that but NO on yaoi (straight male here).
    But yea. Expertly written. Great build up. Good detail and it moves along at good pace. I also found your directors' cometary script to be hilarious. I'll be checking out your profile and looking for more.
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  • From ANON - I_Like_Pie on April 12, 2007
    That was great! I wonder why I can't go to chapter 3...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2006
    Camon, where's the next chapter?
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  • From on July 16, 2006
    I'm not entirely sure if I should smack you for using the minor-Vivi or hug you for making this story at all. Although the dialogue could bear to loosen up a bit, your story thus far doesn't have anything to detract from the overall experience. All-in-all, keep up the good work. I like seeing someone who can actually write with proper grammar.
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  • From ANON - Dorian on July 13, 2006
    Aww, c'mon mate.. update the fic! =(
    It's really cool.. can't wait to read the rest.. though any information on where Kuja likes it is... well.. GROSS xD
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  • From ANON - Dorian on June 12, 2006
    Haha.. This is actually rather interesting. Keep writing. :)
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  • From ANON - Pluto on June 03, 2006
    If I could rate this, I would. Five of five! ^^ You're doing very well, coming back from your writer's block.

    ~Pluto
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