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Reviews for Fate Of Angels and Demons(Finshed)

By : Sephanie
  • From vivarose on June 22, 2008
    hmmm...i'm not sure i like this one as much. kind of like reading the epilogue to "the dark tower" by steven king, yeah its good, but i mentally would've been much happier with the story if i hadn't
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  • From ANON - Reno on August 24, 2006
    It was a good story. Kind of sad at some parts though. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - FullMetalBlunt on July 14, 2006
    Wow...I have read this and the first one. I really, really like it. It is so original and so out of the norm...
    Mmm and Vincent as an evil sex vampire, heh, you just made my day. Usually I don't go for Cloud stories, but I loved this one. Even at work yesterday I was reading the first story on my cell phone. ^_^ Thank you for this wonderful piece of art.
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  • From ANON - BrucesGirl on June 17, 2006
    Well, I didn't quite finish it. The idea is enduring, and you seem to have an excellent knack for description.

    The grammar needs a little work. It's really hard for me to read a story that switches between past and present tenses so much, and I actually think that if you were to correct that, I'd be able to get through it much easier.

    Great job all in all, and good luck with future chapters!
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