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Reviews for Return of the advent child

By : arriabelle
  • From ANON - hakuyako on September 02, 2006
    hmm. . . what to say. . . well, it's kind of cunfusing, what I'm going to say that is, but I love and yet hate this fic at the same time. Don't get me wrong, it's good and everthing, but I don't know, there's just something about it that makes my mind think "stop reading," although I can't.

    Anyway, your writing has greatly improved from before, and I did like reading through this and the first story. I'll be looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
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  • From ANON - Ly on August 01, 2006
    My, this has become very intriguing indeed. Your writing has also improved significantly since the first few chapters. Keep up the good work and update soon, please!
    Hugs,
    Ly
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  • From ANON - Shadowfly on July 27, 2006
    Much better ^__^ Ty!
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  • From ANON - Shadowfly on July 24, 2006
    I love the story but do you think you could space out the dilong more. It's so hard to read.


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  • From Elenachan on July 21, 2006
    Cloud/Reno is just so damn hot. I wonder where you'll take this.
    Keep writing!

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