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Reviews for Rinoa's Education

By : AaronKasmov
  • From dest on February 18, 2007
    great story. i was kind of expecting a big finale though. sort of anti-climactic. but other then that i loved the story. hopefully you write some more stories.
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  • From ANON - Kou on September 06, 2006
    Sad to see this great series come to an end. I hope to read more of your works
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2006
    Good and erotic. Hope to see more ffrom you in the future.
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  • From ANON - Si on September 04, 2006
    Awww, Squall doesn't even get any action? I feel cheated. Heh.
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  • From ANON - Luis on September 04, 2006
    Well.. this was the end???. I was hoping maybe you writing about how this events were going to "change" Rinoa and Squall relationship, or something along those line, but well... it was a great story. Hope to read more stories by you in the future. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Luis on August 28, 2006
    Keep the good work, this story is great.
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  • From ANON - omaesan on August 14, 2006
    This is great. I like how you don't use vulgar words. Please, consider putting Rinoa with multiple male students.
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  • From ANON - Simon_the_duck on August 13, 2006
    I have got NO idea why I find this story entertaining. I hate Rinoa, and fics where people are...well, 'passed around'. But...I want more. Now. :D
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  • From ANON - Luis on August 08, 2006
    You continue doing a great job. I love both chapters but, maybe for the meaning of the Seifer/Rinoa reunion, I like chapter 8 the most. Hope to see an update soon. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Poor boy on August 05, 2006
    I have to say somethings. At the beginning I thought you needed to write with some more detail what happened to Rinoa, because the plot WAS no the strong thing in this story. BUT, and I have to say BUT, after chapter 7 I understand (or at least I guess/hope) why the little description in all the Rinoa/XXXX interaction. Not only the chapter 7 clear some of the story (that's why I use the WAS at the beginning) but made I good reflection about all the action in previous chapters. Keep with the great work and update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Luis on August 05, 2006
    Wow. Those two last chapters (6 & 7) were great. I mean, in chapter 6 all the Brothers/Rinoa action was well written, you describe what you have to describe, nothing more and nothing less. But in chapter 7, I think, you show that this fic does have a plot and it's not only sex what you are trying to show us (well, at least is what I think). Hope to see an update soon. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Sharon on August 02, 2006
    Is the constant use of the pronoun 'it' supposed to keep this at its Lime rating? I'm sorry, but use a thesaurus and just make it a lemon, add a little detail maybe. You've got all the acts going on that require this to be rated for graphic content, but then you just smooth over 'it' and make 'it' a nice attempt but sorry outcome. This whole thing is obviously just a reason to put Rinoa in sexual situations with every thing that breaths, so it's basically one big PWP no matter how many chapters you add... that means making it worthy of being smut, and the fact that you skip any detail really confuses me. It's like a PWP, but not... it has neither plot nor porn, which makes me wonder why you wrote it. I don't mean to say you're a bad writer or that the story is pointless... it just isn't going anywhere. I'm just suggesting that you either focus on giving it a plot or giving it better smut. Personally, a little of both wouldn't hurt, since I feel kind of bad for how you've portrayed the characters. Rinoa deserves better, and since she's the main character and I assume you like her a lot, have a little heart for writing her well and not totally OOC.
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  • From ANON - Luis on July 26, 2006
    Great to have this story now as a multi-chaptered story. You are doing a great work. Hope to read more about Rinoa (and maybe Squall). Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2006
    Overall, a pretty good piece. As with most things I see, thin on plot, but in this genre, that's absolutely forgiveable. The characters maintain some of the "feel" that anyone who has played the game understands, and the scences are quite well written. I'm curious to see how (and certainly hope) the author continues and ultimately concludes the story, as many stories with excellent beginnings slow down as authors grasp for novel material and ultimately allow a well written story to be torpedoed by a mediocre (or missing) ending.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2006
    I read a bit of it, simply for the sake of being slightly qualified to review... it's nothing against your writing, which was decent, I'm just not a huge Rinoa fan. I just needed to point out that you shouldn't have made three whole stories... just one story with three chapters. I mean, with no regards to the work itself, it's a waste of space. (Again, I'm not talking about your story... just the fact that you have it separated like this.)
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