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Reviews for Lesson Learned

By : LadySephiroth
  • From Meili on July 23, 2006
    Nice. To be honest I don't like either Rufus or Elena but I still liked your story. So many writers here focus on the physical. I like how you showed the thoughts and feelings more, it was very sexy. Good interpretation of the boss-employee dynamics there. :) Also, I like that it's het.
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  • From ANON - Kriiz on July 23, 2006
    For knowing nothing about the Final Fantasy genre and being completely disinterested in it up to this point... NOW my attention has been attracted.

    This chapter lives up to a secret fantasy of mine, only half-realized until now. The relationship between a subordinate and boss has always been a sexy possibility in the right context (mafia/military context = GOOD. I think that like a manager/employee relationship is just ick. XD I could NOT imagine boning my manager. SLFKJSLDF.) Add a cute outfit to the mix and things are WIN. Add light bondage and a dash of punishment and I am THERE. Or, I wish I was there.

    Fabulously sexy without being overdone. I seem to notice in my writing, my reading, and my role-playing that it becomes increasingly harder and harder to write about sex in such a way that re-captures the imagination. But instead of focusing solely on physical or emotional aspects, you've explored a psycological side of sex that is wholly intriguing to the little sociopath in me. I wish I was Rufus...

    Eagerly awaiting more, although I fear what will become of poor submissive Elena. I can almost picture her snapping and taking out her sexual frustrations on her "master." Ha ha, oh wait, no that's me...
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