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Reviews for A surprising visitor

By : arriabelle
  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2006
    This is good. Hey, will Squall fall in love with Seifer and realise who he wants to be with and leave Kinneas? Or is this all just pure sex for pleasure with Seifer?
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  • From ANON - Vicky on August 05, 2006
    Wow... that was just wrong. I suppose I can understand since you mentioned it's your first FFVIII fic, and since it's a PWP... I guess I just have to be more careful what I read. I must have read too many oneshots and thought this might have been another one... but alas it is certainly just porn without plot. Poor Squall, someone is acting in his guise, pretending to be him and ruining his good name. Well, for a random scene that you wanted to slap the FFVIII characters name on, it was fine, except for some grammar errors. But, maybe you should put up a OOC warning.
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