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Reviews for Nothing Hurtfull

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - Jess on January 19, 2008
    Absolutely wonderful! ^_^ Finally, some realistic sex between virgins. =) Very romantic and in character.

    Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - Hassan on January 14, 2008
    Great stuff there! Very in character and impressive! Me loves!
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  • From ANON - nekozuki on December 04, 2007
    Congrats on another awesome fic! They're so cute, and you did a really good job describing their first time -- not perfect, but beautiful despite and because of its imperfection.
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  • From ANON - =) on July 12, 2007
    OMG.

    Wow, that was amazing. :D. Excellently done! Wonderful descriptions for their first time. Absolutely wonderful!!

    Keep on writing!!
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  • From ANON - Ryo on January 01, 2007
    It's not too bad. However, there are grammatical errors throughout the story that should be corrected, as well as a few words mistaken for something else. I would suggest using spell check to fix these problems. Other than that, it's a very likely story.
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  • From ANON - Rinny Leonheart on November 29, 2006
    This was a fantastic lemon!
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  • From ANON - Si on September 10, 2006
    Not half bad. I'm not a fan of Rinoa, and have an even bigger hatred for het - picky about how women are portrayed and all...
    But, this was an enjoyable read. Good job!
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  • From ANON - indira on September 09, 2006
    Thank you for writing something realistic, it's a lost art really, expressing the awkwardness that is real sex rather than some idealistic fantasy.
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  • From ANON - Lian on September 08, 2006
    WEll...it was smutty, but at least it was nicely written smut (giggles). I am not a Rinoa/Squall fan but I can say what you wrote was both tasteful and more realistic than other exaggerated stories I have read on this site.
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  • From horrorgal on September 08, 2006
    Very sweet. I love RinoaXSquall fics, and you did a good job with this.
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