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By : DB2020
  • From ANON - Ta Boo on January 21, 2007
    Oooh love this chapter! Can't wait for more Seifer/Squall action!

    I'm getting a bit suspicious of all the rape references - Squall is so sure that he can protect himself from rape (even though Seifer has overpowered him numerous times) ... BUT I'm starting to get the feeling that Cale might not be as innocent as he looks. He seems to be overly 'obsessive' when it comes to Squall. He loves Squall greatly, but maybe a bit too much? Maybe he'll just totally snap if he finds out what happened between Squall and Seifer, then try to rape Squall? I dunno ... maybe my mind is just overthinking. lol

    Can't wait for the next update!

    (AFF is so evil making me have to register. lol)
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  • From ANON - kikvws on January 20, 2007
    *happy squee* Gods, I adore this fic. I keep saying how much I love Seifie and Squall's interaction, and it's true...there's just so much love-you-hate-you chemistry there that it thrives. Always looking forward to more from you!
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  • From ANON - theozz on January 20, 2007
    YAY! UpDATESSSSSSS! ILOVE THIS STORY!!
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  • From Shehanitan on January 19, 2007
    …Good work!! There just isn’t anything better to say.
    You’ve really succeeded in catching the characters and keep them. Your plot holds and stays realistic, even the characters reactions and such. Like Seifer acting just the way he was before disappearing for seven years ;)

    I really like this story. For having mpreg team, it is so realistic and… it’s like you can touch it. I like the natural twists in it and that the guys actually reached an age over twenty-five. There’s so few fictions out there with the characters being older that really holds. I’m quite addicted to this story and hope you’ll continue and stay strong with it.

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  • From LeafZelindor on January 17, 2007
    this was a very good chapter, poor Squall...-pats him- i'm quite sure you have a lot more planned for those two ^^
    ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - kikvws on January 11, 2007
    There's something extremely sexy about a fully-clothed, wet Squall *huggles*. I really liked this chapter, and I have to say, personally, I also really like your version of Squall. He doesn't come across as passive to me, just a little more mature than the cranky Squall who glares at everyone in his path. Also, his reactions regarding his child fit very well psychologically, IMO. He was a young father, with no one else really in his life for sixteen years...it makes sense that there relationship would maybe be a little closer than usual.

    I guess I don't really understand how anyone can view your version of Squall as "passive", because to me, he doesn't come across that way at all. He comes across like a single father who loves his only son fiercely. Not to mention all the hell he had to go through just becoming a father, he had to do it mostly alone, despite support.

    I also don't get "victim" out of his interactions with Seifer. Not at all, actually. I'd call it chemistry, in varying states of denial and progression. He didn't just roll over and let Seifer have sex with him once he'd made his move; he doesn't really let Seifer get away with much of anything.

    Well, I just wanted to give you my perspective on how Squall comes across in this lovely fic. I like that he's maybe gonna hook up with Cale. How else will he know what a good thing him and Seifer have going? Plus, I can't wait for Seifer to find out *pictures a cartoon Seifie shooting steam out his ears*. Keep up the excellent work, I'm always looking forward to reading your work.


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  • From ANON - Nora on January 11, 2007
    Honestly, I like the idea of Squall's first time being with someone other than Seifer. Don't get me wrond, I'm a major Seifer/Squall fan, but Seifer sometimes needs his ego deflated in a major way.

    I don't dislike Cale at all and by descrpitions... he's hot.


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  • From ANON - Kyme on January 10, 2007
    I'm sorry... but... I WANT SQUALL WITH CALE~~~ You make Cale SO likeable, you know that!?! Seifer can go throw himself off a building for all I care, now that CALE BERNHEIN is in the picture~ Um.. yeah. But Seifer/Squall is okay... too.. I guess... Please do update more~ I'll give you cookies!!! and I'll draw for you!!! nyaha~

    http://kyme.deviantart.com
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  • From ANON - Vinny the Vampire on January 09, 2007
    Squall you idoit! Not with Cale. Seifer is the one. This chpater was great.

    Please get the next chpater out fast. I'm dying to know what happens. Leaving us hanging with a cliffie!

    I love Squall and Lore's relationship. I hope Lore develops a relationship with Seifer!
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  • From ANON - Rangiku on January 09, 2007
    NOOOO!!!!!!!! Squall's 1st time is in danger!!!! no!!!!! PLS DUN!!!
    ...i really wan squall n seifer 2 b 2gether... ToT...
    so sad~~~ SEifer!! i cry for ya!!! T_T

    nw, after dis hw's seifer's gona react?? can't wait.. i'm still sad though~~
    seifer~~

    update, update *chants*
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  • From ANON - Asasiah on January 08, 2007
    I love your angst, even though its driving me insane! How do you keep the smut out?
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  • From ANON - YACUMO on January 08, 2007
    YESSSSSSS!!!
    AT LAST SOME YUMMY ACTION BETWEEN SEIFER AND SQUALL!!!!
    THANKS
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  • From ANON - Hikaru on January 08, 2007
    Wow, o.O Squall is affected by Seifer. Yes I prefer Seifer kisses!!! ^o^ The love between Lore and his father is so sweet, I want a dad like Squall ^^, and a brother like Lore... no, wait I want a boyfriend like Lore!! ^o^. Two birds in one.
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  • From ANON - Dracoqueen22 on January 07, 2007
    Ooh, the plot thickens. Poor Squall, confused as always. I can see ths going so horribly wrong but also, in a way, it could turn out all right in the end. It depends on who plays their cards right. I'm very interested in seeing where this is going and literally ecstatic that you updated. Looking forward to more; thanks for the great read.
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  • From ANON - Brittny on January 07, 2007
    *GASP* Squall! So unlike you! (end sarcasm)X3
    I am reeeeeally shocked about all of this (not exactly, kinda glad). I need to take a deep breath
    and wait and see what happens.
    Whoah... *blink blink* The cliff hanger is intense!
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