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Reviews for Desire & Existence

By : KiaraExodus
  • From KiaraExodus on January 23, 2007
    Right. I should hopefully have a new chapter within the next week, and it'll have some PLOT! YaY!! :D
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  • From ANON - Klebkatt on December 05, 2006
    Eee! Thank you very much for taking up my challenge. ^^ I was kinda suprised that Quistis appeared.

    This is a good first try. Let me know when you update! ^^

    Kleb
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 23, 2006
    not bad
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  • From KiaraExodus on November 20, 2006
    Thanks honey, this means a lot! I've changed it to NC-17 (I'm from England and have no idea what that means XD)

    I'll write another chapter with your guidelines in mind. Thanks very much for your help xxx
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  • From ANON - Sharon on November 19, 2006
    This shouldn't be rated R. It's definitely NC17.

    Other than that, it's a very underdone pairing, though not wholly unique. The chapter was rather short and entirely PWP, which isn't a problem if it was meant to be like a oneshot or something short like that. Anyway, Seifer's an awesome character to work with, so good luck on future chapters... and remember to do the other characters justice if you have them not being controlled or written in a dream.
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