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Reviews for Living in Darkness

By : horrorgal
  • From ANON - HitokiriKurisuta on January 13, 2007
    Awesome fic. ^_^ Love it. It's extremely well written, and has a shmexy couple to boot. ^_~
    Keep up the great work! :D
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  • From ANON - Pyra on January 12, 2007
    ...O_o....this is cool........you must continue.......YES YES YES *humps air* MORE SEXY MAN SMEX PLEASE!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Lauren on January 10, 2007
    Dear lord, that poor chocobo died! ;_;

    Man, this story is becoming more screwed up with each chapter. Continue! :D
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  • From Leonhart29 on January 09, 2007
    Woah! Sephiroth seemed almost caring there for a moment. I love the way you've written this and I can see why Cloud continues to fight - it wouldn't be Cloud if he didn't.
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  • From ANON - nightshade on January 08, 2007
    i am totally loving this story ^-^ please continue
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  • From ANON - akito94 on January 07, 2007
    I find your fanfic rather interesting and I would like to know when you
    update it! Can you please send me a notice through email when you update?(puppy eyes)
    Thanks N have a good day!
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  • From ANON - Chibi_Nataku on January 05, 2007
    There seems to be a deciding lack of constructive critism from other authors out there. I have been keeping up with this fic, given that SephxCloud is my favourite pairing. I actually started out with the CloudxElena one and enjoyed it.

    I find that your characterization of Sephiroth is very good. He seems to envelop the evilness in all its direct and indirect subtlety, but he pushed very well too. I did enjoy his entire character concept as well, and how easily he seems to manipulate Cloud. Very Sephiroth~ish as I picture him in my mind.

    Now Cloud (he is my favourite character, so I tend to scrutinize him more... sorry). I liked a lot of Cloud's character so far, especially how he maintains himself around Sephiroth. He is definant by not so screamingly so that someone wants to slap him. However, I do find that he swears a lot more than I would imagine (taking lessons from Barret?), mostly because in all parts of the game and AC, he never swears and it almost seems... uncharacteristic of him. I let that slide though, since he is rather well done other than that small point.

    The storyline seems solid, even if it is meant for the purposes of getting those two in the sheets. It's not just a 'grab & screw' like most, but is a well-thought out concept that jives well with the characters. I also really like how you have Cloud remembering his friends and thinking about them in nightmares and such, not just pass them off as "Oh well, they are dead. Cloud would never think of them" It adds a good sense of character for him and adds to the overall plot and why they haven't just humped like mad little weasels.

    All in all, I very much enjoy this fic. It keeps the attention and leaves for suspence on how the story will go. Good job, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From Leonhart29 on January 02, 2007
    So maybe Sephiroth isn't as powerful as he thought, or was that just another "gift" to give Cloud false hope?
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  • From ANON - kikiko on December 27, 2006
    ooh!! this is really AWSOME!! keep up the good work and make sure to update soon


    kiki
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  • From ANON - mps shadowmaster on December 27, 2006
    sancuary of him bedroom? other than that, it's like the mcdonalds comercial- da da da dada i'm lovin it ^______^
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on December 26, 2006
    OKAY UPDATE OR DIE GOT IT MEMORIZED???

    Axel: Hey that's my line

    Marluxia: heh heh poor baby *kisses*


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  • From ANON - Meru on December 20, 2006
    I'm really loving this Fic!!!
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  • From Leonhart29 on December 20, 2006
    Wonderfully wicked. I'm actually starting to like Sephiroth a litle bit. Does that make me a bad person?
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  • From ANON - Atticus on December 19, 2006
    OMG! That was soooooo awesome. 0.0

    I love how you draw it out.... I'm such a sadist, XD I swear it's like, wrong how much I love seeing Cloud suffer at Sephiroth's hand.... But yes! It makes a lot more sense than your average PWP, and it flows very well, writing's excellent... *squees* it's great! I love it! I'll be sure to keep my eye on you. ^_^ And I hope you update this soon! I'm addicted to it... o.o
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  • From ANON - Sasha on December 16, 2006
    i can't wait to read more ^^ It seems promising, although I don't like CloudSephiroth paiting if Cloud isn't the seme :) But well, I like this one. I would like to know more about the empty days and how Cloud fills them
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