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Reviews for Last Mission: Gullwings Style

By : holdenwarrior
  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2014
    Ha. When I read that Yuna and Rikku wanted each other so much in the beginning I'm already looking forward to their scene. But nothing happened between then except Yuna's finger in Rikku while at Miihen Highway. Damn. I wish you'd write more for them, instead of them doing themselves. (Though I must say the starting with Yuna was good).

    Hope you'll come back for this fic. It's good.
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  • From ANON - tantaluss on October 31, 2009
    Just read this and wow I think its the best fic on this site. Hope to see more in the future. Please say this isn't dead.
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  • From Luxin on December 23, 2008
    Well, just started sniffing around the Final Fantasy section, and what do I find? A great story! Keep it up man, this is excellent stuff.
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  • From Streti on October 10, 2008
    Wow, it's been updated! And with some hot and crazy action in chapter 4 too. Next stop: Moonflow?
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  • From ANON - ... on June 09, 2008
    please update soon, this story makes me so horny.
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  • From ANON - Jordie<3 on April 21, 2008
    A-m-a-z-i-n-g, is all I can say.
    I DEMAND MORE.

    Seriously.

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  • From holdenwarrior on October 31, 2007
    I got some good news and some bad news....

    The good news is.... I got chapter 4 completed and chapter 5 is half done as we speak.
    Now the bad news...
    The bad news is.... My laptop is dead so I can't upload chapter 4 (it's on my laptop) Im still trying to get money to get it fixed but atleast I continued the story on paper now so once my laptop is fixed I just need to type it up and post it on here.

    Sorry about this people but rest asured! The story will go on!
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  • From ANON - Tamarzan on May 16, 2007
    This is a great story so far. Keep up the great work. As for the vote I'd like to see some action on Besaid Island.
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  • From ANON - matt on March 05, 2007
    It was quite good, but you could see it was rushed, try to spend more time on the next one, even if it means it wont come out verry soon. I think the next one should be in besaid island.
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  • From holdenwarrior on March 04, 2007
    Hey, readers. Sorry I haven't added chapter 3 yet, It's half done at the moment. Can't tell you what's in it, you just gotta wait and find out yourselfs. I would continue the story now but I lost that will to continue on typing at the moment.... and I just got Final Fantasy XII :p
    Once I finish Final Fantasy XII, give me a week or 2... or 3, then i'll continue on with the story.
    By the way, just so you guys know; chapter 3 will compose of 2 parts. It's kind of a lengthy chapter. More dialog than *ahem* action.

    If you want to give me some ideas or anything just post it here or tell me on msn:- wwerulez2005@hotmail.com
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  • From Streti on March 03, 2007
    Hey, that was pretty nice! Especially considering FFX-2 isn't one of my favorite games. I liked the second chapter, Payne's in your face attitude fit her better than her easygoing game version. Dunno if you're going to continue, but if you are, I'm wondering about what kind of ideas you had for Mi'ihen highway.
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  • From ANON - jsg23 on February 20, 2007
    Wow your story rock ! Besaid Island please !
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  • From holdenwarrior on January 30, 2007
    Cool, it's nice to see im getting some reviews now. I'll start typing up Chapter 3 sometime this month (feb) Im just kinda not in the mood to start it yet. I need that typing motivation lol But don't worry, I got the chapter and the rest of the story all planned out still so just be patient ;)
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  • From BloodJunkie on January 28, 2007
    Very nice. I choose them going to Besaid Island. Anyways like the style so far and hoping to see other characters make some appearances. Here's to a great ch.2 and an as great ch.3.
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  • From ANON - omaesan on January 14, 2007
    I vote for Miihen. Great story so far. Keep going
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