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Reviews for Broken and Bonded Refrain

By : Crya2Evans
  • From SorceressZila on June 25, 2008
    My Gosh, that must have had you steeped in depression for a month! What an amazing piece! I'm a writer myself, and i know that the words effect the writer much more than the reader. I can only imagine what Cloud's character has done to you, lol. Amazing job, really.
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  • From ANON - Ri on April 27, 2007
    That was lovely and with one of my fav song lyrics in it it was so much loverier...*is that a word? XD) So sweet, i mean Rude and Shera is a new thing for me but my gosh they make a real sweet couple, a shame it never happened. Boo oh well! Loved it!! As always ^^
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  • From ANON - Cloris Forever on April 21, 2007
    Awww! Cloud and Aeris are so beautifully tragic. It's why I love them xD But there are never enough of them anywhere and not enough writers with good writing style to portray them in! Could you possibly, maybe think about writing a oneshot/fic for the pairing? pretty please *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Ri on April 21, 2007
    Came back after reading the next chapter and that was so good! The near last part had me all sad!!! Gosh i really love your stories.
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  • From ANON - Ri on April 20, 2007
    Omg i loved the CloudxAerith story. *Wipes eyes* I mean gosh it had feeling in it i mean not like any of your otehr stories, loved it. Now i must read the other chapter. Tseng/Sephiroth! *giggles and goes off to read it* I shall come back with another review. =p
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  • From ANON - Ri on March 09, 2007
    Loved Elena's part, i mean now i know so much that makesher seem more then some nobody character,love it, she is a tough girl yet at the same time she has the girly things that alot of girls show off.Love it! XD She rocks.

    Loved the Reno and Reeve part as well! Woot loved how there thoughts were the same yet were not, you getme? Cause i have no idea how to put it into words. =p But ilove it! Loved the last part when Reno said he WILL make it! Woot shows the man's dedication and uh well he shows that nothing will bring him down from reaching his goal ya? Loveit! Your stories never make me stop loving them. ^_^
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  • From someonesneaky on March 08, 2007
    Awwwwwww man there you go /again/. Good thing I've got kleenex on my desk.

    I really like Elena's chapter. She's such a trip. I'm so glad you didn't turn her into a 'true' blonde. The song didn't seem right at first (it's one of the few I /do/ have), but it does make an odd sort of sense. Will we ever get to 'meet' her mom? I remember her sister being mentioned, I think - damn my faulty memory.

    And much love to Reno and Reeve, of course. I can't wait until you get more into Boundaries. While it's not exactly one of my favorite pairings, I like the way they are in Shattered. A very 'aww'-inducing couple, which is odd, considering it's, you know, Reno. I think you may be the closest I've seen to him being portrayed as the sentimental lovey type. (For some reason, I can still see the image of him in Junon, getting his weapons ready and preparing to crawl through the ducts. I don't know why, but it's one that just completely stuck with me.)

    I know what you mean about eclectic tastes. I've got just about everything except rap, hip-hop, pop, and country - can't stand those one bit, for some reason. They make my brain twitch. But I'll dig these up eventually. I keep meaning to, but put it off.

    And you're welcome for the correction. I'm glad I could do something other than say 'Great story! =D'

    Even though it is. So there.

    ~SneakyOne
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  • From ANON - Ri on March 02, 2007
    I am always slow! So i read the three and Vincent and Cid's parts made me sniffly! I mean so much emotion especially for Cid i dunno why but i love how you write him! I mean you portray him as this tough guy but yet sensitive and his life! Okay i just enjoyed all of the chapters i caught upwith. Each one good as the other! Loved it! Great as always! ^_^
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  • From someonesneaky on March 02, 2007
    Woot! More Refrain! Happy happy happy n.n

    Though you should know you have a chronological oopsie in there -

    >>When he was seventeen, Zack met the man who would become his mentor, Angeal.

    And then just below --

    >>At the age of sixteen, two months after meeting Angeal, Zack found himself acquainted with General Sephiroth.

    Time traveler? xD

    I'm eventually going to have to hunt down all these songs for myself - I haven't heard half of them, but the lyrics seem like good choices so far. =x

    ~SneakyOne


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  • From someonesneaky on February 22, 2007
    Bah! Stop making me all sniffly!

    I can't say enough how much I enjoy reading your work. These 'collections' are a great change of pace - something different in each chapter, just a peek into the inner workings behind the major story. I'll be waiting for the next one!

    ~SneakyOne
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  • From ANON - Ri on February 16, 2007
    I cannot believe i did not even see this story! O_O i must of have been blind! Read it allin one sitting and gosh i love each chapter with each character and just their thoughts and just them!Read the last chapter with Reeve and wow his life sounds harsh! T_T He was nothing more then a puppet him and his sister how miserable his life was. Great chapters all with so much emotion making it so much intense when it is time to read it. Love your work as always! Keep them up!
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  • From someonesneaky on February 10, 2007
    I should bap whoever made this have just one +. *shakes a fist*

    I read these when you posted them on your site, and I have to say I'm glad you decided to post them here. I still love your writing, and despite spending most of my time on AFF, I forget to check anywhere else when my favorite authors have other posting areas. Procrastination and forgetfulness don't make a good combination.

    But now I can wait for more! Yay!

    I have to say the choices of some of the songs are perfect. There are some I haven't heard.

    I liked that you picked If You Still Believe from LoD for Cid and Vincent. That song makes me all sniffly, and it does fit them. I'll have to go and hunt down the others, just so I can listen to them.

    Hope to see another one soon! *heart*

    P.S. First review, muaha.
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