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Reviews for A Day in Paradise

By : serpentsrose
  • From Kyuubichan20 on December 30, 2007
    Yesssss...yummy, hot, steamy man Sephiroth rocks!!! I love this pairing so much and Vincecnt was just so tempting and submissive....I would love to read more!!

    Loved the end when he said "Like I would let you go!"
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  • From Avinacode101 on October 08, 2007
    Now don't make me write a review a third time! Damnit, I just did. Don't make me writie a fourth one then! Write more, blast it! You have a talent for writing this pairing, and its much better than your Vin/Cloud one. They seem OOC in that one, but this one is excellent. WRITE. MORE. SOON. !!!!!
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  • From villiansaresexy on July 29, 2007
    hahah cute XD soooooo whens next time XD
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  • From z32 on July 15, 2007
    I loved the next time thing, a really hot fic, great work :3
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  • From Avinacode101 on July 10, 2007
    I insist you write more.

    Also, read over this first because I noticed some more errors - like toung is spelled tongue. And some minor errors like an extra s on waist (it made it plural, and I doubt Vincent has more than one waist) and is instead of his. Otherwise, still a fun read because sex on the beach with Sephiroth and Vincent is NOT available anywhere on AFF.net except here.


    Now write more!
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  • From Avinacode101 on April 06, 2007
    Excellent Sephiroth X Vincent fic. I rarely see many.
    There were several errors, but not many. There was a period in the middle of a sentence, and "funnier" is the comparative of "funny," not fun. The comparative for fun is "more fun."
    Fun, more fun, most fun. Funny, funnier, funniest.

    Excuse the grammar devil in me, but grammar is part of what makes a good story.

    Here are some good points (do not worry, I do not just look for the bad in a story):
    1) Wonderful story idea.
    2) Good plot
    3) Nice, erotic sex scenes. A delicious read.
    4) Characterization was not my preferred choice, but you did make it fit in well with the storyline. Good job!

    All in all, four out of five stars! Good work and keep going. Especially on my (and your?) favorite pairing, Sephiroth / Vincent. There is not enough of it in the world. Thanks for the nice read.
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