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Reviews for Sword Practice

By : wickedorin
  • From ANON - Silverin on December 18, 2007
    YAY!! Angeal finally gets some action as well! Very nice, these three, yum yum!
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  • From alwaysabrat on July 02, 2007
    heheheh luvs!! i thought it was really funny how it took zack a while to figure out they were talking about sex.
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  • From RJaneyP on May 20, 2007
    Definitely Yummy...one is fun...but two is even better...Ah Lucky Zack!
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  • From SeveredWing on April 23, 2007
    Oh my God! That was so incredibly erotic and...cute. It feels so wrong to have read this during the day! ;) And to leave it where you did! You're one of those sadistic writers, aren't you? You MUST write a sequel. I'm not even above begging: PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel! Grr. You can't leave it that way!

    I'm going to go sulk now, but at least I'll be doing it with a discreet smirk on my face. Well done!
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  • From Mitts on April 23, 2007
    Mitts

    Oh, I like the ideal of more...lol
    The only thing I will point out, (mind your own business Penny)is that, during the story, you tell how Sephiroth completely removes Zacks trousers....but then, after Seph has given Zack pleasure, you say that Seph 'tucks' him back in, which implies Zack still has his trousers on, just undone..
    Just a little thing I noticed, thats all...
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