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Reviews for Static Shock

By : BlondeSoldierSlut
  • From sorrowfall on May 17, 2009
    It's been so long since I've something really good and you filled that need so wonderfully. I too get tired quickly of the soft very unmasculine Cloud that so many seem to favor. This was much, much more to my liking. Please post the next chapters as soon as you can.
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  • From labetasdan on April 14, 2009
    OMFG....Did you really call it a rape? I call it a hot delicious sex!
    Congratulations...you're good! Very good indeed and I loved this unusual pair!
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  • From tenohikari on November 19, 2008
    wow, it was Vincent! Totally unexpected!
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  • From LadyVorlana on October 13, 2008
    ....Ok, now I really wanna see more. I normally dont enjoy rape scenes but DAMN...and duuude...I LOVE VINCENT! He is the freakin hottest guy in all of Final Fantasy 7 (which is a hard title to get considering the sheer number of bishies there) Thank you so much for this and I cant wait to see more. Will there be a Vinny/Cloud scene? Or any Vincent/? scenes??? PLEASE?
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  • From tenohikari on August 01, 2008
    What happened to chapter 3??? Dying to know here.
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  • From RaitenKitsune on July 26, 2008
    now that was HOT!! there is not enough LozCloud pairings
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  • From tenohikari on May 04, 2008
    OMG, Where's chapter 3? I've been dying for a Lox/Cloud fic ever since I saw the pairing from a doujinshi. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2008
    *twitches**holds hand to bloody nose* N-Next chapter soon.
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  • From jseathl8 on January 02, 2008
    Great story so far!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!:D
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  • From VampireHaku on December 31, 2007
    So.Damn.HOT!!! Seriously, great fic! I like the twists in this such as Cloud being all into it all of a sudden ;D and the ways of torture, very nice as well. Hmm I'm guessing Kadaj and Yazoo are watching, just a guess! Can't wait for more tho, update quickly!!
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  • From alleycat88 on December 24, 2007
    Very hot! I love feisty Cloud! and I think maybe the other two brothers or Vincent! Update soon! Merry X-mas!
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  • From SavannahMarie on December 22, 2007
    No way do I think Cloud's given in. FAT chance.
    It would be really hot if one of the udder brudders were watching - or Vincent... Vincent would be a welcome sight in this story hehehe.
    Other than those few, I don't care to visualize anyone else.
    You've done excellent with this so far, and I mean that. I think all this is pretty freakin' awesome... what's going to happen afterward, I wonder? Or is his story just about the interrogation? Hmmm..... wonder wonder wonder.
    I'm excited.
    Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the good read!
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  • From Nikitadacosta on December 22, 2007
    Waaa! You've just updating it! (^O^)/
    Yaaaay! Okie perhaps this doesn't count as a review post XDXD And I haven't even read it XD
    I'm so excited right now and am gonna start reading it! Just wanna say thank you for replying to me
    and continuing this story! And yes please make the upcoming chapters with torture and sadism too XD

    And yes I strongly agree! You can exactly read my mind! I'm also prefer macho tough ukes oh yeaay baby! XD
    It's more sexy that way graaaawr! XDXD I don't like it when ppl portray Cloud as a whimpy uke X(
    For me it's more interesting and hot if the uke is playing hard to catch kind of attitude XD And sadly there aren't many fics like this ;_;
    That's why I'm very happy when I found yours!

    Okie I'm going to read it now! Take care!
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  • From UnsoundTripp on December 22, 2007
    I dont know about you guys but i cant wait for more of this story xD
    Ive known some of the layout of events before it was written and yet im still blown away with it all
    The setting, storyline, personality, everything is marked perfectly and not to mention its hot as fuck x///x

    I especially love the detail and word choices of each scene, weither it be Loz's rough motions or Clouds fiery rebelling , either being incredibly rich with creativity and accuracy




    All I know is I love this story and I need MOOOOOOOOOOORE


    >x]

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  • From Nikitadacosta on December 21, 2007
    OMG!! Ive been wanting a sadist BDSM rape LoxxCloud fanfic! :D There are just a few fics of this pairing ;_;
    Yes! Please continue it! Will looking forward for the next chapters :D
    Oh and may I suggest something if you don't mind?

    The story already has a good start and there's a potential that the story will have a great plot.
    However, I think it would be great if the flow of the story is quicker, if you understand what I mean ^^
    Sorry my english is not very good but I'll try to explain it ^^
    I mean it's good to explain how the character feels or explaining the setting the character is currently in, however
    I think it would be great if the flow of the conversation or action is quicker ^^ This is to keep the reader interested in reading it and make
    the fic not boring.

    But anyway, I like your idea and your usage of words has resulted in a non monotone paragraph which is great!
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