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By : Mitts
  • From wackybat on October 27, 2009
    You should deffinantly keep this going it's really good.
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  • From DrkDreamer on May 19, 2009
    Chapters 6 - 9

    Now, I'll join in the chorus - UPDATE. UPDATE!

    Poor Cloud is deceiving himself. I'm willing to bet money that Sephiroth is on the other side of that door.

    But I have no clue how he'll react. Please update.
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  • From DrkDreamer on May 19, 2009
    Chapters 2 - 5...

    Ah, that's the Seraphim I know and love from Pam Nunn! (Obviously I need to learn how to spell his name. Sorry about that.)

    Wonder why all the bad guys in the world don't use the trick of hurting someone else to get what they want from a prisoner. Guess some unprincipled ones would ignore and/or enjoy it.

    But never OUR sweet victims.
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  • From DrkDreamer on May 19, 2009
    Chapter 1...

    I apologize, Mitts! I certainly know by now that you are a skillful and amazing storyteller. And yet I still haven't read everything you've written. Bad, BAD friend!

    OK - you've got me intrigued. I'm guessing that's Cloud strung up on the wall. And that Seri... what's-his-name will come to the rescue.

    Or maybe not - you did say the story was dark and angsty ;-) A reviewer on Collateral Damage mentioned the story and asked why you hadn't updated. (Or, when you would.)

    So, I rushed over to see!
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  • From riotaku1 on May 04, 2009
    great plot just can't stop reading until it stop please update can't wait to know what happpens next
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  • From ANON - Chaosruler1 on December 01, 2008
    Biggs and Wedge, really? Star Wars fan much? :D It makes me happy to see another fan in another fandom, you know. Is Cloud playing the part of Luke here? :D Is Sephiroth Darth Vader? :D I'm having fun here, can you tell?

    Seriously though, I like the story. I've seen it on Fanfiction.net and pssed it up there, but seeing it here, I thought, "What the hey? Why not?" and read it. Very serious up until I say the Star Wars reference. I laughed.

    Seph is super mean, or rather very good at his job, ne? Cloud's not going far from that door, is he? :D
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  • From TemenNiGru on November 14, 2008
    Whooop! An update :D Thank you for continuing this story, great chapter - I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2008
    did he die lol
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  • From ANON - Duo on July 02, 2008
    oh god... cloud... ;_;
    Someone help him...
    Update please.... (begging)
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  • From alleycat88 on April 15, 2008
    Oh no! Save him!!! Please update soon!!
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  • From sephcounttheways on April 15, 2008
    :sniff: sad. Poor Cloud.

    I can't think of anything lewd to say about this other than..

    HEAL HIS PAIN, SEPHYYYYY!
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  • From Savaial on April 15, 2008
    This story is the kind that draws you in instantly. You keep your reader's attention too. High drama, the kind that makes your heart beat faster... Wooooo! Such brutality with these two forceful wills clashing up against each other.
    I eagerly await your next chapter.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on April 15, 2008
    Keep going, I like what you have so far. Keep up the good work.
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 30, 2008
    My actual reaction to seeing a new chapter posted :

    :swallows food in a hurry and quadruple clicks on Break Down: OOOH!!

    Oh, Cloud. You're such a tenacious little fucking D, but you gotta know that Seph is gonna ream you. Habitually, upside down and backwards.

    And I said it before and I'll say it again; Sephiroth is SUCH a COCK.

    I'm perched in wait for the next chapter.
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  • From alleycat88 on March 30, 2008
    YEESH! Cloud has it rough neh? But he seems sturdy enough! I wonder how Sephiroth will take this? OOO! Cant wait for more!
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