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Reviews for Infidelity

By : ricobanderas9
  • From Tourach on February 20, 2009
    This same idea could also work with FF4's Rosa, as Barbariccia does look a lot like Rosa in many images I've seen of both of them. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2008
    Great story. Appealing because he gives himself up to her willingly (until the end, anyway.) If I have to nitpick I'd say that the ending was a bit rushed. A great twist, but the consummation could've been better if it happened BEFORE she charmed him--you know, to really seal the deal.

    But great, great. I liked your latest Mistresses chapters because Locke gave himself up willingly at the end. The whole charm thing has been done to death (myself included) and it's good to see variation on the theme to keep it fresh.

    Working on that tradefic yet? I'm interested to see what direction you take.
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