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Reviews for Pater Familias

By : Savaial
  • From Savaial on October 31, 2008
    Ranna, Cloud will be okay. Sephy won't hurt him. Don't really look for Cloud/Sephiroth slash in this fic. I'll do something else for that later, I swear. Thanks for the R&R!



    sephcounttheways, thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you're liking Hojo's internal monologues so far. As for the insect repellent, both Seph and his daddy had a little...communication going on with that.... Yeah, Seph was trying to help his dad, but possibly not the way it looked at first, lol.




    Savannah! Hey!
    Truthfully, I was going to email you with notification, but my email crashed and I can't access my addresses. A week I've been dealing with that. Jeez.

    Glad you're liking this so far. I realize there's only a few of us that dig Daddy Evil. I think Sakura will wear on you, like a fungus, lol. Give her a chance!

    I love Cloud. He seems like he's so ripe for a bit of schizophrenic interpretation.

    Glad to see you, sooooo much my friend.

    You'll see the sephy spawn eventually, never fear.

    Thanks for the read and review, girl!
    P.S., enjoying the swamp cold in your supposedly sunny state?
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  • From ANON - Cannibal & Jamie on October 30, 2008
    Hey!! Look at you! Typing up a bran' spankin' new masterpiece and you don't even letta bitch know?!

    I see how it is.

    Oh, but I am digging it so far! I'm reeeeeeeally not sure about liking this Sakura chick - and it's not just because she's stealing my man, no. I'm sincerely just not ready to like her at all.. and I know Hojo's fucking brilliant and all, but he's.. eh... well he's just liking her TOO much, dammit.

    Your Strife still cracks me the hell up.

    Jus' sayin'.

    And when the hell are we going to see some Sephiroth spawn, eh? EH?

    I know you'll deliver.. Savaial ALWAYS delivers. Rock on, babe.

    -Savannah
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  • From sephcounttheways on October 30, 2008
    Oh good graces, what on Earth is Sephiroth going to do to poor Cloud? XD

    Love Hojo's thoughts and regrets about how he treated Cloud before.. love.

    Also, I was oddly touched by the misquito repellent part. Such a humdrum thing for Sephiroth to say, but it felt like he was saying *more* somehow.. as if the mere fact that he could say such a humdrum thing to his father made him think, or happy, or something. Or the fact that he remembered such a tiny complaint meant he himself was becoming more loving and thoughtful.

    It was just.. touching.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on October 30, 2008
    Cloud/Seph! (I don't want to make Aeris unhappy, but it is still my OTP.) I hope Cloud will be okay.
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  • From Savaial on October 30, 2008
    Ranna, yeah, regular romance is a bit formulaic. Boy meets girl, girl and boy fall in love, they have a break up and a reunite. Done. And, people like that most of the time. Honestly, I think a lot of what gets published these days is the sort of shit you don't care if you leave the novel on the airplane by accident.

    Thanks for the read and review! And, yes, you know you're getting into a psycho love affair if you read about Hojo...




    sephcounttheways, thanks for the R&R! Don't worry, he has good ways to spend his money. Thanks for the vote of confidence on my OC's. It's hard for me to write the perspective of the few females in FF7. Slim pickings...





    DS, Thanks for the review on Paper Tiger Burning. That was one of my bigger fics, which took effort to keep semi-tight. As for keeping in Seph's POV, Pater Familias is in Hojo's POV, and, eventually, Sakura's as well. If you want more Seph, I do have a slash fic with him and Cloud called Mastered Materia. And, I'll eventually do another Seph-centric fic.

    Hojo is not popular with a lot of people. The stereotype of the mad scientist is usually enough to keep people from getting into him. Aside from that, his culpability in canon is unpleasant. Still, I love the underplayed underdog. Try to stick with this fic and you might find yourself liking him a little more. Maybe not. He gets violent.

    BTW, the original voice actor for Hojo in DoC is a lot better. Nachi Nozawa was Vexen in Kingdom Hearts and Shido in Devil May Cry, amoung many other roles. The English speaking audience got treated to a loony version, because we expect that of our mad scientists...

    That was Paul Eiding, btw, Max Tennyson in "Ben 10", and Colonel Roy Campbell in the Metal Gear Solid video game series.



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  • From ANON - DS on October 30, 2008
    I just finished reading PTB last night, I can't remember the last time I read a fic that long without losing interest; you're amazing! I'm also thrilled to find you have a sequel up so soon. I can't wait to read more - one question though, are you going to write any from Sephiroth's POV? Usually that disinterest me, but you have a wonderful way of characterizing his first person, I love it! Plus, it means more Aeriseph lemony goodness. *snickers*

    Yeah, Hojo, I'm gonna admit he's not my favorite character. Though now that I think about it, I didn't mind him till I played DoC. Must have been his voice, I was muting my TV every time he came on. O_O
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  • From sephcounttheways on October 30, 2008
    LOL Hojo won the lottery!! Wonder what he's gonna do with all of it 0_o That's a lot of flow.

    Sakura is cool, I always like your female OCs.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on October 30, 2008
    Regular romance sucks. It's so hard to manage and you never know if you've got a psycho on your hands. But with Hojo, you know what you're getting into. Well, sorta.
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  • From Savaial on October 29, 2008
    Sephcounttheways, you kill me.

    Chapters won't be as fast now that I've got some stuff to take care of. (sigh) Real life doesn't like writers.

    Yeah, they got married for real. I'll go into the wedding later, but they got a Justice of the Peace wedding, just like I did in Virginia 11 years ago today, lol. I imagine fondly that Sephiroth told LabCorp to talk to his father about the blood test.

    Sephiroth- "My father keeps buckets of my blood. Call him. He should have some of Aerith's, too. Here's his number- 526-293-4656."

    LabCorp Technician- "......"


    Thanks for the R&R! So much more impetus for writing when I read the reviews!
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  • From sephcounttheways on October 29, 2008
    WOMAN! How did you do this so friggin quick??

    Ohhh bliss! I love Hojo so much!! I'm psyched that this is centered around him, seriously. And your Cloud is so neurotic and CUTE! XD aaah! I love him and all his wierd little problems and finnicky little traits!

    And I don't think it's possible for sex to get more gratuitous than that.. I feel bad for Aerith's vajayjay. Well.. no, actually I don't, this is Sephiroth we're talking about. Did they actually get married? I can totally see them just eloping, or else just calling themselves married by the power invested in the General, can't see Seph doing the whole cut the cake thing, haha!

    So, like a greedy whore, I say, MOOOOREE!
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  • From Savaial on October 28, 2008
    Thank you, Rana, KD. I love the feedback, no matter how it comes to me.

    Rana, thank you. Stick with me and you'll see the characters you love.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on October 28, 2008
    Eheheheheh. I really like your Hojo. You also have a way of making OCs come alive to me. It's a great skill.
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  • From KristinaDalton on October 28, 2008
    Here comes Daddy! Please, no one panic. Miss Savaial shall provide hypo-proof body armor and flotation devices.

    KD
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