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Reviews for What Lies Within

By : WolfessSanu
  • From ANON - Powder on May 06, 2012
    Awesome! Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on July 06, 2011
    Please please please update this story! It is so addicting and well written and I love it - I know it's been 3 years since the last update, but please please update! Please!!!!!
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  • From WingedAngelGuardian on May 16, 2009
    Thank you for this story! It was very well written, and I loved the interactions between the characters, especially Reno and Rude! Zack and Angeal go so well together, too.
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  • From ANON - cloudyseph on January 07, 2009
    Wow....you've got me completely hooked! This is a great story, from an interesting POV. It is great! You've kept all of the characters pretty well in character, and even when they aren't you've made it believable. Great Job! You're gonna kill me until you update next! *grins* Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - cloudyseph on January 06, 2009
    OMG! that was so good...You've done a great job making the situation believable......Angeal/Zack is a cute pairing but not a very popular one that I've seen so far. Great Job!
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  • From ANON - secretwishes527 on December 15, 2008
    wow!
    i liked the fight scene, when Angeal told Zack to sit, and Zack immediately obeyed and that ended up saving him. I also like the way how Zack is so dependent on Angeal and totally trusts him, and the apologizing when he really didn't do anything wrong was so endearing! i'm going to miss Zack calling Angeal 'Master' but he did earn Angeal's name, huh? another thing i like in this world of yours is how many people are into BDSM and Zack isn't considered 'weird' just because he lives a certain way. awesome, and eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jirian on December 11, 2008
    o.o ohhh earring lol very nice touch XD reno was funny i like that please update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Jirian on December 11, 2008
    Very good this is starting to get interesting i cant wait for the next chapter ^^!!! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - secretwishes527 on December 11, 2008
    oooh! i like it! it's very...normal. it's not overdramatized, or too sappy. it seems realistic, well realistic in a fictional world ;) good job, and keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Jirian on December 10, 2008
    wow...this story is touching...cant wait for the next chapter ^^ please update soon!!! poor zack though :(
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  • From ANON - Elenna on December 10, 2008
    omg l love it! poor Zack though. look forward to more!
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