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Reviews for Hunt

By : Vire
  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2014
    Question marks are your friend.
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  • From kirastastefultragedy on September 09, 2010
    wow./... this was very good :) you should definately do more on this :) very hot../. and cool !!!
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  • From MoggiyeM on March 21, 2010
    I love Chaos/whoever pairings, he needs to be written about more often! And this, was hot! :D I especially like the scene with Reno flirting with Tifa.
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  • From ANON - Cuzosu on September 25, 2009
    Very interesting. When will it continue? It feels unfinished.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2009
    please update soon! what will reno say in the morning?
    ASOTA
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  • From Bulma on January 04, 2009
    Hello. This is an interesting story. Needs to be run by a beta, but decent enough. I'll give a few beta marks. First, you abuse "the other" too much. The redhead, the brunette, the smaller Turk, the possessed ex-Turk, Chaos, Reno; these pronouns would be better than the near constant use of "the other". It can be used, don't get me wrong, but one paragraph had "the other" used like four times. It was only a two sentence paragraph. Also, paragraphs should be broken when the perspective changes. The dialogue of two separate characters (or three as used a few times) should never be in the same paragraph. New person talking, new paragraph. Otherwise, this was a good job, if a little rushed.

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  • From ANON - Elenna on December 16, 2008
    I like this a lot. update soon, plz!
    only thing that i noticed was the *slight* overusage of Reno saying 'yo'.
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