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Reviews for My Dark Angel ll

By : trabeck89
  • From Stormraven on July 10, 2009
    Ya know, I love the pairing and everything. But the format is KILLING ME! The dialogue format you are using is very clumsy to read, and doesn't have description at all. This makes your fic very one-tone. I appreciate that you have written a lot, but can you go through and really do a good write-up of it? I know you must have done an RP with someone, but please rewrite the whole thing in a story format, this will give us a really good way to connect with your story and would look so much and read better. If I have to rate this fic and the previous one, out of a scale of 1-10, I'll have to give you a 3 because of the way it is written. Otherwise, the idea is solid, now you have to make it an actuality.
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  • From chaoslover123 on June 19, 2009
    Work has been kicking my ass! This is just what I needed! *bows down* Thank you, great writers of yaoi goodness!! But how could you do that to cute little Kyo! Poor baby! *cries and hugs Kyo* But at least the bad man is gone...Speaking of which! *runs over to Vincent and slaps him* That's for Chaos! Bad, bad Chaos! *runs and hides till next chapter*

    P.S. All hail bi Tseng!
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  • From chaoslover123 on May 23, 2009
    This story just keeps getting better and better! Yucky cougar trying to get with my Reno! *hugs Reno doll* He belongs to Vincent! Hehe! Poor Rude!XD That part killed me! Rude is Reno's fart slave!!! I feel bad for Kyo! I hope he gets more friends soon!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please update soon!!
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  • From chaoslover123 on May 02, 2009
    I love it! Kyo is the cutest boy on earth! I just want to eat him up!^^ Loved the wedding night! *wipes up drool* Hehe! It must be the little boyish side in me but I love the toilet humor! You don't see it alot in fics and it's a part of life!I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon please!! *gets down on knees and begs*
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  • From chaoslover123 on April 24, 2009
    I'm so glad I found this story! I'm home sick today and needed something to keep me from going crazy! I've cried so many times reading it and I almost never cry! I love this story and boo on anyone who flames it! Very good lemons! You must update soon! I want to know what happens on the wedding night! And what happens to Demyx and Zexion! I bawled when they broke up! Waiting by the computer for the next chapter!

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