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Reviews for Finally

By : Silverstargirl
  • From Spophaloaf on May 10, 2009
    I'm really enjoying this story. Can't wait for an update!
    Don't leave us hanging for too long :)
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  • From Kikarisan on March 25, 2009
    Aww, little Squall and Seifer are so cute, but it's so saaadddd!

    Really my only constructive criticism is that the dialogue can be pretty awkward sometimes, like they're talking really formally. Most people tend to talk with a lot of contractions.

    But I like the idea of filling in the blanks during their childhood, thought I never thought of Matron as such a bitch before lol. Overall I liked it and am looking forward to reading more from you =)
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