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Reviews for Revelations

By : fyrbyrd074
  • From MoggiyeM on March 17, 2010
    I think that was the hottest scene yet :3
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  • From ANON - Gslinger on June 09, 2009
    Ahehah the lovely Yazoo, the preternatural whorney one, he appears to have his own life stream going full tilt ;)
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  • From schwaerze on June 09, 2009
    Hahaha, I just come home from a really hard night and want to go to bed and what do I see? You updated!!! *glomps you* So of course sleeping must be delayed,I need stuff for nice dreams and I bet your new instalment will do the trick;)

    Woah, Rufus! He simply can´t get over it, can he? Calling Yazoo a 'remnant...' But he´s good enough for a fuck, uh? *smacks Rufus* Or maybe he simply wants to their 'relationship'... Or maybe, just maybe, Rufus is simply an ass XD But wonderful, I love how you make him so arrogant, it fits him perfectly!

    OH.MY.GOD.

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    *goes to reread it*

    o.O

    THEY ARE ALIVE!!!!! Oh my god, I never saw THAT one coming!!! And I love the idea that Loz doesn´t remember who he is and what he did! It makes perfect sense, because if he can´t remember Yazoo he won´t go search for him, which otherwise I´m sure he´d have done! Now I am wondering why he doesn´t remember anymore, since Yazoo knows everything what happened and didn´t lose his memory... Maybe he hit his head on concrete? Hm...*wonders*

    Hahaha, okay, again Rufus, he´s such a dork XDDDD Just adopting the 'princess'-thing, I bet Vincent must be inwardly fuming! Or maybe he isn´t the jealous type?

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cough* Sorry, I neede3d to let the fangirl squeal out XD Yazzy is pregnant again, Yazzy is pregnant again *dances and smothers you* That´s so awesome, I so had hoped he was, and now he is ^________________^ Congrats, my dear!!! Maybe it´ll be a girl this time? And I suspect that Sephiroth is the father? Yes, yes, yes? *nearly faints at the idea* Oh my, just imagine what beautiful, beautiful children those two´d have! Batshit crazy kids, but beautiful nonetheless ;) Ah, I love this series of yours so much, my two OTP all in one story!!! Oh, hey btw: If Yazzy doesn´t want this one, can I adopt it? Pretty please? *puppy eyes*

    “So Yazoo, who’ve you been sleeping with lately?” asked Tifa who was holding his first born son. - Hahahaha oh yeah, Tifa, you have no idea what you got yourself into just now XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

    I love how smug Yazoo is when he lists all the guys he´s been sleeping with, I had to stiffle a giggle :D I can so totally see him right before my eyes, hehe. He was pretty clever to remember to not say Vincent´s name, but then as you wrote, there´s not much left for guessing. Well, except Barret, I think?

    Awwww, and poor Tifa. You just have no chance against our favorite bishi boy^^

    The discussion that followed was very well done, I must say. Just like in a real conversation everyone is talking at cross purposes and speaks what comes to mind first. It gave a very real feeling, and it was very interesting to see, where each characters priorities lay. And then you smoothely managed to get them to focus back on Yazoo and for once all of them agree that he´s irresistable XD I think, that is my favorite part so far^^

    Yazoo stuck up his nose, “I’ve got the hots for anyone.” - OHHHHHHHHHHHH MY GAAAAAAAAWDDDD; ROFLMAO *holds poor stomach and wipes away tear* Okay forget what I wrote before, this is DEFINITELY my favorite part XDDDDDDDDDD Oh, I can so totally see it XDDDDD Wonderful, simply wonderful, my dear!

    Oh yay Vincent, keep on glaring at Tseng and defend your baby -the both (or maybe even three) of them! *happy at protective Vincent* Hm, but I´m wondering if they really aren´t into child rearing? *imagines Vinny and Yazzy and baby* Hehe, would be fun to see them trying^^ Who knows, maybe they even like it?

    Awwwwwwwww, Vincent´s so cute^^ Asking if he is Yazoo´s favorite- he does care after all *melts*

    As always the smut was delicious! And Vincent was cute again, afterwards^^ Yeah, and Tseng better beware, I bet Vincent can get really pissed off, should he notice that Tseng tried something again! I liked that Vincent showed sympathy, and was a bit protective, but that he wasn´t too much. I think it shows that he respects Yazoo as an equal, and not some damsel in distress. He gives Yazoo his private sphere, and that´s exactly what I think Vincent would do! Loved how he´s running his hand through Yazoo´s hair and tells him about condoms XDDD

    *sighing and melting at the end* Damn, it´s over again already... Okay, I think it already came acorss, but again you wrote a wonderful chapter, and I so enjoyed reading! I can´t wait to see what will happen next, and how the relationship of Vincent and Yazoo will develop! I´ll go to bed now and dream about it, thank you so much for writing this!




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  • From ANON - DTE on June 09, 2009
    That was so hot. Yazoo looks with anyone but especially hot with Vincent. I like all your stories, but can we see more Vincent/Yazoo fiction in the future?
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