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By : Sethite
  • From ANON - leblanchater731 on October 17, 2011
    Whoa...I always hated Leblanc (ever since she first showed her pale little face), but even I never imagined that she'd be THAT caliber of evil!

    Rikku swears revenge on Leblanc? I have the perfect idea: call on Paine to exact revenge! What Paine could do is come up with a sphere-recording showing the rigged dance-game machine and Leblanc's messages (as well as the exhausted suffering faces of Yuna and Rikku) and show it to Gippal. Gippal will be furious that anything like...Leblanc's machinations...happened to the girls, especially Rikku! And then if Paine doesn't tell Nooj about the whole turn of events, Gippal will. And the fact that Leblanc is responsible for the fate of Yuna and Rikku won't sit well with Nooj - Leblanc will fall out of Nooj's favor (or semblance of favor) absolutely and permanently!

    Brilliant revenge plan there.
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  • From SailorAF on September 12, 2010
    Fucking great story!
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  • From kellyraye815 on September 12, 2010
    this one was good. written a little awkwardly in some places, and the ending was a lil cheesy, but overall an interesting concept that i liked :)
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  • From salarta on June 10, 2009
    There were issues with typo, grammar, tags, etc, but aside from those structure concerns, I loved it. I seem to always love the ideas you put in your stories, they're usually creative and take things pretty far. The only other thing I'd have to say there is that I feel more could've been done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2009
    That was...really really awful. If you want to write cheap porn that obviously has no grasp of female anatomy I wish you wouldn't post it anywhere and expose people to your poor writing and worse smut.
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