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Reviews for Misinterpretation

By : schwaerze
  • From Sajirasama on November 04, 2009
    O Romeo, Romeo! Wherefore art thou Romeo? > > LOL, I can just see yazoo drawling that out^^

    And I´d appreciate it if I could get a Juliet where I don´t get the chills when I turn my back on her, yo!“ “And it´d be great if my love interest would be an actual Juliet and not a batshit crazy remnant in a frilly dress, yo!” > > That is SO Reno....

    Incongruities > > I had to look that up....

    There ain´t no way we’re goin’ to my room, yo. > > What, Reno, you’re so lazy to open the door you’re gonna do it right there in the hallway? ;P

    He got a sudden, very unwelcome image of Yazoo stiffly sitting on his sofa with a blank face and then, out of nowhere, bursting into manic laughter. > > LOL, but that is much Sephirothier (or Kadajier) than anything else...

    If this had been his woman, he´d just punched that damn bastard of a cousin into a bloody pulp, busted some kneecaps and gotten the hell outta there with her. > > Reno, not every girl thinks violence is a very clever solution....


    LOL, i liked it^^ now... where's my cookie?
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  • From Rina76 on June 26, 2009
    Lovely! I enjoyed the teasing banter between them, even as they're in the middle of fiery sex. The description of Reno opening up Yazoo's robe to discover that gorgeous pale body underneath was absolutely delicious and very vivid to imagine! The smut was bold and raunchy, just the way you always write it, and I like how in this one Yazoo wasn't simply submissive but gave as good as he got. And I just adored the part at the end where Reno wants to hold Yazoo against him. That was kind of sweet and made me go "Aww," a little bit. ^__^

    The thought of Loz acting in a play made me giggle. Somehow, I get the impression he'd be a terrible actor and would forget his lines. Or accidentally break the props. XD

    And yay, unscripted kissing! Got any tickets to that show? I'd so pay to see it.

    Nice work, my friend. Reno and Yazoo go so well together, I must admit. I might have to write some Renzoo myself somewhere along the line... *starts plotting the hotness*

    Btw, what the hell was in the fridge? I hope it wasn't a cat. lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2009
    That was fucking beautiful. That's all I can say. XD
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