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Reviews for Arcane Crisis

By : Chemotaxis
  • From ANON - Erakiran on December 08, 2009
    Seifer finally making some progress? :p

    I was just bemoaning the lack of Seifer/Squall earlier today, so this update is awesome :D
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  • From ANON - F5Bobcat on December 07, 2009
    AWESOME chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 15, 2009
    Why haven't you updated this story yet?!
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  • From AloraCorwyn on October 20, 2009
    I just read your profile page and it broke my heart. What can I do to earn the revival of this story sooner rather than later? Shall I beg? Praise you endlessly? Appeal to your sense of guilt-stricken honor?

    In sad truth, I bet you've managed to swamp yourself in classwork as I have, and that's something I can't fault you for. I can't even offer myself as a constant editor of your work because I don't know when I'd find the time to dedicate to it... which sucks because that's what I want to do with my life. *sigh*

    I await your eventual return
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  • From ANON - lo on October 10, 2009
    Wow, chapter 6 was intense. I see Squall is still fighting tooth and nail. I can't wait to see if this ever resolved.
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  • From ANON - lo on October 06, 2009
    I love the psychological ride that poor Squall is taking. It really adds to the tension. Nice work.
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  • From ANON - pinkstar on September 28, 2009
    awesome chapter again ^^ Your depiction of their personalities
    is on spot, can't wait to read more!
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  • From AloraCorwyn on September 27, 2009
    Another amazing chapter Chem! Squall seems a little easy to overpower though... I loved that he healed the behemoth cub, and that he lashed out and landed a heavy blow to Seif's jaw. Seifer's personality is just great. I look forward to more chapters!

    Point of edit: "eight" should be "eighth" in a few places.

    I'm also insanely jealous that you're actually expending creativity in your writing class. Mine's been lackluster so far :(
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  • From ANON - lo on September 11, 2009
    I love this turbulent. Your writing style is wonderful even the spar was engaging. Nice work!
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  • From AloraCorwyn on September 09, 2009
    Oh Chem, I melt every time I read your writing. And thank you so much for the honor of a private address *blush* I'm glad I could help!

    I look forward to future developments in the story line; I really like the friendship you built between Squall and Quistis--it's not a common connection in fanfiction. I also think you portray Squall's thoughts wonderfully, especially when he's spending time with his friends and is surprised to realize how well they understand him and the lengths they go to in order to accommodate his social preferences.
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  • From ANON - Flying Buckets on September 08, 2009
    This story is absolutely brilliant! I'm guilty of being one of those people who don't review fics very often (while it's not a valid excuse, I mostly blame this more on the fact that I read through my PSP, which pretty much makes it impossible to review at all), but I absolutely HAD to take the moment to drop you some praising words, just to let you know that your work is being read and is being *really* enjoyed. Really *really* enjoyed!

    I hope to see more from you shortly, and keep up the great work!

    ~Flying Bs.
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  • From ANON - lo on September 08, 2009
    This is intense, I like that. I really like what you are doing with these two, the relationship is wonderfully turbulent.
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  • From ANON - DB2020 on September 07, 2009
    I’m enjoying every moment of your story. As impatient as I get to read more lemon action, I love slow progressions. Awesome chapter. I can’t wait for more ^_^
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  • From AloraCorwyn on August 13, 2009
    Another great installment! I was happy to find it waiting for me this morning ^_^
    As always, your writing is descriptive and colorful. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Thank you, as always, for your words!

    A couple of things to check:
    1. "remembering how quickly their trail had been resolved" should say "their trials"
    2. "angry at the blond for having left" I suggest changing to "leaving" (stronger verb)
    3. "Squall could all to vividly image" should be "too"
    4. "gray-blue eyes shut close" I suggest "closed" (or "shut") rather than "shut close"--it just reads awkwardly

    I just want to note, that I realize I'm nit-picking small details, but your writing is really great and I rarely bother to offer edits on anything. Yours is worth fine-tuning, in my opinion.
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  • From Spophaloaf on July 31, 2009
    Fantastic chapter! I loved the complete submission by Squall near the beginning. And he's lying to Quisty too.

    I think he's getting in over his head and he'll realise he wants more of what Seifer can give him, the ability to completely lose control.

    Seifer's got a nasty temper sometimes, and I like how Squall is setting him off, more of that might just end up with another romp in the sack! We can hope!

    Anyways, please keep going, I thoroughly enjoyed it :)
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