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Reviews for L.I.F.E Insatiable

By : Anzi
  • From elrazhnia on March 19, 2010
    Totally loved it. ^.^ I'm a big yaoi fan, but I never considered BlankXZidane before. But after reading this, I'm actually starting to think they're pretty cute together. >w
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  • From ViviOrunatia on March 01, 2010
    Incredible. ._. Amazing. I lack a sufficient adjective to describe how [positive adjective] that was. The characters were so well done, the story was paced perfectly, the ending was so real.
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  • From ANON - Ireyon on December 16, 2009
    This is officially one of the best stories that I've read up ontil now. To think that I actually stumbled across such a jewel while browsing AFF.net, an in such an unexpected place too. Please keep on writing, it would be sad if that were the last story you posted here.
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  • From bootysweat27 on September 07, 2009
    Although I don't have the highest standards in the world, I am certainly one hell of a harsh critic, so you can believe me when I say that this story was one of the best things I've read in a very, very, very, very, very, very, very long time.

    ...and, yes. It was THAT long.

    I liked that you made the honest attempt to vary your vocabulary. It's somewhat difficult to do and many people don't even bother. I'm impressed that you tried and actually succeeded to a pretty good extent.

    You also did pretty damned well keeping them in character even though they were placed into a situation that absolutely never occurred in the actual game. It can be hard to do sometimes, but you did amazingly.

    I also really appreciated that you weren't shy about the tail. You seemed like you'd forgotten it existed when you first started but, in hindsight, that was most likely due to the fact that they were most likely bundled up to an extent that the tail wasn't an issue.

    There had also been a brief period where I'd thought to myself 'Wouldn't it be better for realism's sake for there to be a burmecian among the four 'gorgeous' girls?' However, upon finding out what their relationship to one another was, I had to change my mind on that subject. The fact that they were sexually intimate actually decreases the chances of a Burmecian falling into the mix. The societies aren't so seperated that friendship is out of the question, but they are seperate enough that a sexual relationship isn't very likely. Also, that bit about not caring for furries in your profile helped me to understand that it was personal.

    I have to say that, altogether, this was an absolutely excellent story. Congrats. Though, don't let it get to your head. I've found that te more you beat yourself up, the higher the quality of the writing.

    On a more personal note, I read your profile and, upon finishing, I sat back and thought to myself 'I like this guy.' So, I'd really like it if you could drop me a line.

    My email address is Dinkelberg27 @ aol. com.
    Remove the spaces and you've got it. The purpose of the spaces is that some sites disallow URLs and email addressess in reviews and the such.
    My AIM is also Dinkelberg27.
    You can also contact me via PM through my profile thingy on the forum. I'm The Rabid Semicolon there.

    Drop me a line. I like how you write and I like how you talk. Peace biscuit!

    ;
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